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    TheRainbowDashShow's Stories (7)

    • A Rainbow Forms
      Rainbow Dash wants to confess her feelings to Applejack. The two have a falling out.

      16,946 words · 722 views · 66 likes · 4 dislikes
    • The Rainbow Crusade
      The Cutie Mark Crusaders mission to save Rainbow Dash's job turns into something much larger
      48,151 words · 353 views · 32 likes · 2 dislikes
    • The Rainbow Grows
      Some pony tries to tear Applejack and Rainbow Dash apart from one another.
      12,712 words · 507 views · 41 likes · 4 dislikes
    • A Fractured Rainbow
      Applejack makes a terrible mistake with Rainbow Dash
      13,084 words · 460 views · 32 likes · 3 dislikes
    • The Rainbow Spiral
      26,794 words · 367 views · 27 likes · 3 dislikes
    • The Rainbow Arc
      18,533 words · 443 views · 23 likes · 3 dislikes
    • Search for a Home
      9,372 words · 412 views · 13 likes · 1 dislikes

    The second in the 'Rainbow' series, Sequel to A Rainbow Forms.

    Heart's Warming Eve is approaching and Rainbow Dash has something special planned for Applejack. Now staying at Sweet Apple Acres the two ponies try to keep their romance hidden away from Ponyville. However some pony does discover their secret and soon after they find themselves being pried apart from one another.

    First Published
    29th Jun 2012
    Last Modified
    29th Jun 2012

    Comments ( 19 )

    #1 · Chapter 12 · 46w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Readers be warned, I flunked high school. I never passed a single English class in my life. My grammar is bad and I know this. I tried to proof-read this the best I could but with my lack of education that can only go so far.

    #2 · Chapter 12 · 46w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Come on now bro, we've read your last story. Unless you've intentionally screwed it up there should be no problems. Anywho imma go read this one now:twilightsmile:

    #3 · Chapter 12 · 46w, 3d ago · · ·
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    can't wait to start reading this one

    #4 · Chapter 12 · 46w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>833429

    Can't wait to start reading the next one you mean? :pinkiegasp:

    Just a little confused cause you said "this one"

    #5 · Chapter 12 · 46w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>833453 All of them. Still have to start on this one, will sleep first

    #6 · Chapter 12 · 46w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>833468

    :facehoof:

    Why you post this comment on the last chapter of the story?

    #7 · Chapter 12 · 46w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>833473 If you post on the fic itself and not the chapter, your comment gets placed at the last added chapter

    #8 · Chapter 12 · 46w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>833483

    LIES! TERRIBLE LIES!

    Oh... Okay... :fluttershysad:

    Anyway, go get sleeps, it's healthy for you.

    #9 · Chapter 3 · 46w, 2d ago · · ·
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    they were far too shut their eyes now

    I think a word is missing

    #10 · Chapter 6 · 46w, 2d ago · · ·
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    breathe in, his hind hooves began to

    twitch wildly. enter to soon

    "Right now it feels like something like you are drowning. 2 like's

    #11 · Chapter 12 · 46w, 2d ago · · ·
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    now I can say I can't wait to read the next one

    #12 · Chapter 6 · 46w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>834545

    Fixed and Fixed, much appreciated as always P:

    #13 · Chapter 3 · 46w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Another word is missing in the same sentence :pinkiesmile:

    they were far too frightened shut their eyes now

    It has to be this way:

    they were far too frightened to shut their eyes now

    #14 · Chapter 12 · 46w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>836841

    What is this sorcery! I swear I'm an idiot sometimes...

    Anyway, thanks for catching that.

    #15 · Chapter 12 · 46w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>836903

    You're welcome. :twilightsmile:

    #16 · Chapter 12 · 45w, 6d ago · · ·
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    D'aaaawwww :pinkiesad2::heart::pinkiesad2:

    #17 · Chapter 12 · 45w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Well done.

    #18 · Chapter 4 · 43w, 4d ago · · ·
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    why is this is dark? :fluttershysad: im loving it though, so much tension, i just have to know what happens next.

    #19 · Chapter 6 · 34w, 4d ago · · ·
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    That was so dark and awesome, well done.

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