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Ahh... Fics like that are not so much on FIMfiction. ![]()
I really need my Grimdark/everypony's being killed by something highly improbable or attacked by thing like zombies some time.![]()
There's a few errors or things useless, but this is not staining the story.Here are the ones I saw:
I-i dont understand..." I reply/
Why is that slash for? ![]()
Again, the whispers start thier plea's.
Is it not 'their'?
Oh what I would give to atleast know what happened.
I think you mean 'at least'
Well, now that I have finished seeking little things like that, I'm off, and I let you my thumbs up! ( or is that hoof...?)
Sinrar
Well that was definitely interesting. Felt definitely on the Stephan King side of things with the ambiguity of it all. Though, you did miss a couple marks (A.E "I've")
'Sides that. Damn good read.![]()
thats scary only because i live not to for away from a forest javascript:smilie('
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Read this on a whim, Good plot, but definitely need an editor.







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