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Pandela 2110

Joined April 2012
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    Pandela's Stories (2)

    • Teardrops
      Life can be full of mystery's and wisdom yet to be discovered.

      1,064 words · 143 views · 7 likes · 0 dislikes
    • The Fog
      Never go in the Everfree alone...
      1,377 words · 287 views · 10 likes · 2 dislikes
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    A short tale of how a stallion comes to know what happened to his lost friend...

    First Published
    29th Jun 2012
    Last Modified
    29th Jun 2012

    Comments ( 11 )

    #1 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    I need a new picture for this :P

    #2 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Pretty Damned good! I love my Grimdark :pinkiecrazy:

    #3 · 46w, 15h ago · · ·
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    #4 · 46w, 15h ago · · ·
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    Ahh... Fics like that are not so much on FIMfiction.  :pinkiehappy:

    I really need my Grimdark/everypony's being killed by something highly improbable or attacked by thing like zombies some time.:pinkiecrazy:

    There's a few errors or things useless, but this is not staining the story.Here are the ones I saw:

    I-i dont understand..." I reply/    

    Why is that slash for? :rainbowhuh:

    Again, the whispers start thier plea's.

    Is it not 'their'?

    Oh what I would give to atleast know what happened.

    I think you mean 'at least'

    Well, now that I have finished seeking little things like that, I'm off, and I let you my thumbs up! ( or is that hoof...?)

    Sinrar

    #5 · 46w, 13h ago · · ·
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    >>831224   Thanks for the feedback! ^^

    #6 · 46w, 12h ago · · ·
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    Yay! I made a new Poster for The Fog!  :scootangel:

    #7 · 46w, 12h ago · · ·
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    Well that was definitely interesting. Felt definitely on the Stephan King side of things with the ambiguity of it all. Though, you did miss a couple marks (A.E "I've")

    'Sides that. Damn good read.:rainbowkiss:

    #8 · 46w, 12h ago · · ·
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    Oh god, the image...:rainbowhuh::rainbowderp:

    #9 · 45w, 6d ago · · ·
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    thats scary only because i live not to for away from a forest javascript:smilie(':applecry:');

    #10 · 42w, 2d ago · · ·
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    damn...that whas awesome and scary like hell:pinkiehappy:

    #11 · 36w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Read this on a whim, Good plot, but definitely need an editor.

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