Lyra Heartstrings is a born lyre player. However, she can also be very clumsy, and, when an accident breaks her lyre, what is she to do? Lyres are far from cheap. Luckily, the quirky unicorn is more than ready to take her friends' advice and recommendations to find a new to bring in some cash. After all, she has to buy a new lyre is she wants to keep her lifestyle. However, going out of you comfort zone can be harder than it looks.
Don't use parentheses, use commas instead. Apart from that, it was a nice little story. Have a thumbs up.
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Thanks, I'll remember to do that!
I shall put this on my read later. Have a moustache while you wait.
Cute story idea, any idea if you'll do anything with it?