School love, but only pony in this world heap of difficult, because there are so many people, and no one notices it unusual, but because there is no barrier to true love? But still, you can make some stupidity
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Well then... That happened... Good story I give it a 10/10 on my randomness meter.
Unfortunately, automatic translators are simply not adequate for fiction. You end up with phrases like "equal coitus quadrilaxar square of sixty" that mean nothing. I'd be kinder if this were your first fic, but you've been doing this for four years now. Please, please find someone who speaks both English and Russian, and translate properly. As this stands, it's pretty much unreadable.
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When somebody's been doing this for a whooping four years then at least he put some dedication into it. Stop discouraging him.
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He has the right to ignore me and publish whatever he wants, within Fimfiction rules. I have the right to comment. That's how this site works. I've had bad reviews in the past and I accept that as part of the deal here. I could write "jsilfgjslfjselifjsilfjlsjfs" for 1735 hours, and the fact that I'd spent 1735 hours on it still wouldn't make it worthwhile. This story isn't that bad, of course -- but in places it's literally unreadable. I don't think there's any reason to pretend otherwise.
I would be delighted if he wrote a story that was really fantastic. There's nothing better than seeing someone progress from poor to amazing. But it won't happen without a real translator.