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FerociousCreation


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It has been months since Fluttershy and Thunderlane have become close friends. And of the course of those months, the shy mare has grown very fond of the stallion. Feeling brave, Fluttershy finally confesses her emotions to Thunderlane. Unfortunately, the stallion rejects her and upsets Fluttershy's friends; including the Lord of Chaos, Discord.

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Comments ( 13 )

I can't wait to see what else comes next. Also, I feel sorry for Fluttershy, but at least she's getting moral support.

Someone. Broke. Fluttershy's. heart?


THIS CAN NOT GO UNPUNISHED.

7846582 but in all reality, looking forward to the rest of this.

Your Discord and his tricks are absolutely fantastic. I desperately hope for more of him in this. Great job!

No offence, but I don't think the girls would go this far if somepony broke one of their friend's hearts. I mean blasting Thunder with the Elements, really?:facehoof: Discord on the other hand, he probably would do something crazy...

7847516 No offense taken. Trust me, it is over the top as for what they say, but in my experience, some ladies will kill a man if he hurt their friend in any way... regardless of character.

7847516 Also, I try to stay close to the show's intention while adding my own spin of course.

Aw come on! Cut the poor stallion some slack, will ya? I men, I know Rarity, Rainbow, and Discord are all trying to help, but if a guy comes wanting to explain himself and maybe apologize, then you should hear him out! And if he did it because he likes someone else, you should accept it and move on. I'm sure Fluttershy isn't the only mare in Thunder's life, so I'm sure she'd understand. And besides, they weren't even a couple yet, so it's not like he cheated on her or was having an affair. He just wasn't interested and loved someone else, and now he calmly wants to explain his reasons. You don't have to make his life a living hell just for that.

I apologize for the rant, but I felt that these points needed to be addressed. In short, Fluttershy's friends need to lay off.

I kinda want this to get better before too much longer. You're doing fine with it for now, but do try to not let it fall flat by the end. :twilightblush:

7861903 All we know is he's meeting Blossomforth later. That hardly constitutes Thunderlane wanting to date her. :ajbemused::facehoof::trixieshiftright:

This was a nice story, though, I'm upset with how Rarity and Rainbow tried to torture the poor guy. Discord you know is gonna do that, which doesn't make it okay, but the other two mares should know better. I'm glad Fluttershy managed to put a stop to it just in time, however, I think she should at least have her friends do some kind of punishment. Like help out Thunderlane, do some chores, that sort of stuff.

As i saw the comment, it's not a good story for my favorite stallion so i'm not gonna read that ^^'

Good grief... this entire situation is asinine as Tartarus. It's not like Thunderlane broke up with Fluttershy just to be mean and cruel. He must have very good reason for doing it. If those three damn fools Discord, RD, and Rarity would let him see Fluttershy and let him explain and perhaps apologize to her.

“You mean fish, right?” Sweetie Belle asked with a brow raised.

Well, Sweetie Belle. The most common plural form of fish is indeed fish. However, under certain circumstances, you can use fishes as the plural form of fish.

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