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  • 106w, 3d

    It's been a long time, hasn't it?

    I notice I don't do much here any more, and that's something that could stand to change, so I thought I'd update the devoted few (haha!) on what I'm working on at the moment, as I believe it's good to keep in contact with your readers, so they know you're not dead.

    Right now, on my list, I'm working on a Silver Spoon x Applebloom shipfic that I think should come out quite nicely! Short, fluffy, and cute. That's what I'm aiming for.

    The prologue for A Game of Bits was a great way to test the waters! I'm sure some choices will have been confusing, but it's right now in a precarious position in which I'm trying to construct some sort of lore. It's definitely worth keeping an eye on, though right now, it's on the back-burner!

    Lastly, I owe an old friend a request - a Pinkie x Twilight shipfic, to be exact - and I intend to fill that as soon as possible, with something a bit more angsty than usual, as that's more his style. He likes that sort of thing, and I write far too much happy-go-lucky fiction, if I do say so myself!

    There you go. A small but meaningful update. Tell your friends!

    (Oh, and for all of you "Leave Your Crusts" readers, the next chapter is on the way!)

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  • 157w, 6d
    In Conclusion

    So basically I'm just adding a blog post here to tell anyone who stumbles across this page a little bit more about who I am and what I do. Whether it matters is ultimately not a question for me to be answering (though in doing this I'm pretty much answering anyway, thinking about it), and I'm a bit too garrulous for my own good, but I feel like putting something up here for others will be a more than a little bit helpful in future.

    Hey there! I'm Terse, also known as TerseWriterfag. I'm a writefag from /co/ and generally publish all my work there or in my collected Google Documents page, which can be found here. It's pretty useful for checking out what I'm writing that I don't submit here, whether it be quickfics, parody or other such nonsense, so if you're in the mood to read something else by me, though I promise nothing prolific, I do promise all the effort and quality I am capable of delivering. The amount is entirely up to you!

    Otherwise, I'm just really knocking around a little bit. I offer help of all kinds to anyone who asks, and you can find me at my email address (TerseWriterfag@gmail.com), often on /co/, or knocking around the IRC. Just pester someone about me if you need me and they should be able to tell you if I'm there, and if not, what I'm up to. On the personal front, I enjoy a wide range of cinema, literature, music and video games, amongst other things, and when I'm not here, I'm often off either playing whatever sport takes my fancy, studying (law, ugh) or doing work, whether for charity or for monetary gain.

    Don't be afraid to give me a shout!

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The Grand Galloping Gala left many a heart broken, dream crushed, or mouth tasting bitter. In its aftermath, Wonderbolt escapee Soaren finds himself in Ponyville, with a solution to all three, at least for an orange earth pony whose bark most definitely matches her bite.

First Published
29th Nov 2011
Last Modified
30th Nov 2011
#1 · 151w, 4d ago · · · One ·

This has a lot of promise as a story. I can't wait for the next chapter!

#2 · 151w, 4d ago · · · One ·

I love the soarin/jack shipping the most.

#3 · 151w, 4d ago · · · One ·

Oh wow.... you get me a date and I'll get you date? Soaren, you're sly fox) Wanna buck that Apple? Don't we all

#4 · 151w, 4d ago · · · One ·

Keep up the work!

#5 · 151w, 4d ago · · · One ·

another awesome story to track once again

#6 · 151w, 4d ago · · · One ·

♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪

#7 · 151w, 3d ago · · · One ·

TERSE BE MY WAIFU:raritycry:

#8 · 151w, 3d ago · · · One ·


Whoa, that's uncanny. Moments before you made this comment I came to check the page and respond to some comments, and, bam, then this turns up. I'm a little scared.


Anyway, to the rest of you guys, I'm glad you're enjoying it! I shall put up some more posthaste, probably tomorrow! Maybe even today if you're lucky!

#9 · 151w, 3d ago · · · Two ·

i'm loving this story so much! Can't wait for what's next! (hoping for more :pinkiehappy::heart::twilightblush: moments!! XD)

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#11 · 151w, 2d ago · · · One ·

Things were fine until you got to the "family dinner". Then the perspective started zipping around so much I got whiplash. Pinkie's holding out well, then she's the saddest one at the table, Applejack sits down to eat and then she and Rainbow Dash are in the foyer fighting...maybe you need to narrow Twilight's perspective, or leave her's earlier so she isn't trying to tell the reader everything at once?

#12 · 151w, 2d ago · · · Two ·


Fair is fair! I get told that a lot, that my perspectives shift far too quickly and haphazardly for anyone besides me to follow. If you're finding it troubling, man, I can see about correcting it! Is there anything in particular you take umbrage with or should I just pass over that section and pad it out to smooth the transitions and my thought processes over? The problem I have is it makes absolute sense to me, so I need you to be specific so I know what to correct.

#13 · 151w, 22h ago · · · One ·

It's Soarin'

#14 · 151w, 22h ago · · · Two ·

Sorry, had to do it once. Love the story, keep up the great work!

#15 · 151w, 21h ago · · · One ·


and Twinkie.

This story is amazing. I love you.

Throw Dashfire in there and you'll be my new god.

#16 · 151w, 19h ago · · · Two ·

Loving the :fluttershysad::heart::duck: shipping out of nowhere, great story!

#17 · 151w, 18h ago · · · Two ·

this ees good, although soarin is a bit creepy in this one.

#18 · 151w, 15h ago · · · One ·

when dash froze did she do it because she wanted to be with soarin of was it because she was going to be with spitfire....can't tell:rainbowhuh:

#19 · 151w, 9h ago · · · Two ·

:ajbemused: ... you want me ta ship with who now? :ajsleepy: well, I guess I can give it a go...

Very promising so far, keep up the good work!

#20 · 150w, 6d ago · · · Two ·

I'm loving how you manage to throw in other shipping's along with the plot line... i espcially want to know more about the tickling session :twilightblush::pinkiehappy:

#21 · 150w, 5d ago · · · Two ·

so well written i cant wait for more

#22 · 150w, 4d ago · · · Two ·

AWESOME!!!!!!!:heart::heart::heart::heart::heart: PLEASE MAKE MORE!!!!:rainbowhuh::rainbowderp::rainbowlaugh::rainbowwild::trollestia:

#23 · 150w, 4d ago · · · Two ·

:pinkiesick: of waiting for next 1 they're so :yay:

#24 · 149w, 4d ago · · · Two ·

clever. this fic has an enviable problem: it is so layered with subtlety that it is easy to lose entire points in the flow of its structure.

i would recommend pointing out a few of the more important details again and again through the layers of subtlety. a few notes that emphasize the actions of character as scrutinized by their friends.

this is very well-paced, thoughtfully procured drama. the interplay of the various characters' goals off one another, producing each action, it is extremely satisfying. Like a good soap opera.

#25 · 147w, 4d ago · · · Two ·

I went through the effort of making this and everything!

#26 · 145w, 5d ago · · · Two ·

Loving this story so far, never would have imagined Twilight and Pinkie together but i'm lovin this plot SO GET SOME UPDATES DONE!

#27 · 143w, 3d ago · · · Two ·

... this story is so dead :ajbemused:

#28 · 141w, 5d ago · · · Two ·

love the idea and the story just needs to be updated:eeyup: so if can update soon

#29 · 139w, 3d ago · · · Two ·

Friggin update it laa

#30 · 136w, 3d ago · · · Two ·

this story is so extinct, it was pronounced legally dead by the dodo :rainbowlaugh:

#31 · 135w, 3d ago · · · Two ·

this story is good i hope the author hasnt abandoned it.

#32 · 123w, 4d ago · · · Two ·

>>348079 This story is more abandoned than my old account (>>322886)

>>47260 This, I think, was the first piece of fanfiction I ever read. It's really a pity you're letting it die.

#33 · 98w, 4d ago · · · Two ·

This fic has been on my too-read list for a full year now. I guess I won't start it..why set my self up for the disappointment of never reading how it ends?

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