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On the evening of their weekly sleepover, Scootaloo has a very big surprise for Rainbow Dash. She bought her a copy of the newest Daring Do book, knowing that Rainbow wouldn't have had time to get one of her own because of her job. Her only condition is that Rainbow has to read one of the last few chapters of Daring Do and The Sapphire Statue to her for a bedtime story.
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That was cute!
Can't wait for the rest of the stories to come out now 
I have a feeling the ending could lead to a possible sequel ;3
Great story!
Words can't express how much I like this!
You know, I really need a Scootaloo bookshelf for cute stories such as this!
Soooooo adorable!
I loved every moment of this story. I was smiling the whole way through. 
To adorable....
Wait, I thought it was Daring Do and The Sapphire Stone.
I love fluffy stories feautiring these two.
So cute i wish it wasnt a one shot and that you would continue it
Too adorable.
Dash:
the d'awwness.
it haunts me.
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too cute!
Another wonderful story, Abyss.
This is a very good one-shot.
Loved it, very touching
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Name of Story: Scootaloo's Bedtime Story
Grammar score out of 10 (1 is grammar that needs to be worked upon as basic principles such as capitalization and spelling is an issue, and 10 is impeccable): 10
Pros:
Happy Scootaloo is best Scootaloo.
Mrs. Cake giving them bonus cookies and donuts was a sweet (get it?)touch of character for a character rarely seen in fan fics.
The ending was pure cuteness!
Cons:
Rainbow Dash never repaid Best CMC for the donuts in the fic.
The Daring Doo story, while good felt like it slowing down the cute flow of the story.
Personally, I just don't like the Scootaorphan head cannon. Yes it could and has made for some cute scootalove, but why not say, have the fic start with RD as scoots mommy? Or Scoots has loving parents that allowed a sleepover between best sisters?
Notes Section:
I loved this story! From the donuts, to the snuggles! It was super sweet! Welcome to Imperium Of Man Approved Texts on Small Equines cute fic!
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Yay
This was adorable