A series of scenes in the Conversion Bureau multiverse, mostly set at meals. The story mainly follows two long time friends, Saul and Alan, and focuses on how they relate to other OC's, each other, and the rapidly changing world around them.
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What in the world posessed me to read this while I'm so hungry?
The amount of detail you go into with the food is so tantalizing.
All in all a very enjoyable read. Structure-wise you have wonderful grammar, spelling, and spacing. The friendship between Alan and Saul is feels very believable and comfortable, I love the interactions between them. Please continue writing in general and this story in particular because it deserves to be read!
My word am I glad this updated too, I've been waiting for it! Our friends have both changed a great deal, strangely enough it seems the pegasus has changed the least!
Please, for the love of Luna, continue this story. I've been waiting for it to both continue for some time, and I just have to tell you how fabulous it is.
You have a gift for small, believable details that brilliantly works to make your story shine. I swear I was watching this as I read it; certainly I was tasting it from time to time. My Dinner With Andre has zero on this work, and I cannot but hope that you Just. Keep. Writing. It.
I am really hungry for that steak - NO, what I mean is, I am really hungry for more of this story. I want to hear how these two friends deal with the difference between them, I want to hear, well, everything more. Fantastic premise, excellent detail, breezy writing style; this work truly impresses me.
Great Celestia's Beard, please update regularly and often; this is magnificent.
♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
I found this story tonight after reading a few of the other Conversion Bureau stories. I am going to be starting one myself and I am just picking up some more on the universe.
Other than a few spelling errors I really can't say that there is anything wrong with the story. (May have just been my eyes actually.)
I hope that you decide to continue this one, it is intriguing.
I gotta say that this is quite an interesting way to explore The Conversion Bureau Universe. I can really enjoy something like this but I would probably be unable to write it nearly half as well so good job on the writing I'm gonna keep coming back for more whenever the next update might happen.
Just found this, please keep it going, I'm enjoying every moment of it
... Wow. You air have left me speech (or type)less. Amazing story and well... Everything so far! Would love to see an update, but take your time, quality is better than quantity :D keep
Up the awesome work!
I don`t know why, but your writing style really connects with me like some of my favorite sci fi novels. In other words, KEEP WRITING!
P.s Are you from the DFW area? Ive lived in Arlington Texas all of my life.
Moar. MOAAAAAR! Don't leave us hanging like that man!
So when are you going to continue this great story?
Dafaddah
I like it