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Bahamut0


I'm a fan of Yu-Gi-Oh!, a few other anime, and videogames. That being said, hope you enjoy my stories!

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A dark force is on the move, and it has been corrupting noble dragon. Turning them into dark shells of their former selves. Burst, Inferno and their friends must find the source and confront it before the dragons are lost to evil forever!

Chapters (12)
Comments ( 161 )

Omg! Love this so much! This first chapter was amazing now that there family reunion is together and Shadow Thunder meet starlight now it's time for him to meet Ace's friends and girlfriend can't wait to see the next chapter

7646844 Yep! I'm
Liking this so far and when I was what's this was about I was like omg Legendary Dragons like Critias and Hermos Timaeus friends and other legendary dragons or being captured/being turned to evil and I can see this getting more good and better and also getting more awesome!

Are you going to put Critias and Hermos in the story?

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I'll see how well I can make them fit in with the other legendary dragons of yugioh.

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Yup. It cetainly is!

7647501 next chapter is going to be epic... probably going to see some shock faces and some pretty funny or some eyes widen mouths dropping reactions

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Yeah. Ace will have a LOT of explaining to do.

7647520 Yeah he sure is I can just see it now

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Just finished the latest chapter!

7647612 Love this so much! Wow this was some chapter rd getting dragon powers and the duels were so Epic!... and that end with starlight oh boy.. now I can see her being different around Shadow Thunder when he sees her again because from the first once he fell right in love with her wondering how this going to play out between starlight and shadow Thunder. And 2 Ace introducing Shadow Thunder to his friends and to his girlfriend... with probably lots and lots of questions and explanations along with it

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So what did you think of Moon interacting with the CMC?

7647674 pretty good I like how they got along good with each other

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thanks! This will be played upon later in a future chapter.

7647684 looking forward for the next chapters and future chapters and some funny reactions shock faces mouth dropping and some moments and romantic moments between loves and romantic moments between 2 people who will eventually become loves/couples

Thanks for using my oc's as characters! Will we be seeing them more?

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They will be showing up later on.

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So what did you think of how your OCs introduction? Also, what did you think of Moon's interaction with the CMC?

7647836 I really liked how they were all in a group! But it would've been cool if burst let them all face him at once. And with moon, I want to see those 4 duel. Like applebloom and moon vs scootaloo and sweetie belle.

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you know, you just might get your chance to see that. Depending on if I can fit it in.

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BTW, what did you think of me shipping Burst with Nightmare and Celestia as opposed to just one of the two?

7648072 also just a little suggestion for the end of each chapter like you did with your 1st YuGiOh EQG book can you give us a little A/N at the end of each chapter giving like what's going to happen next like starlight traffering to the school ((if you are planning that)) or shadow Thunder is going on a date with starlight or bust and friends noticed that something been going on and so on and so on

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I haven't done that in a while. But I might try doing it again.

7649340 kk :pinkiesmile: and also looking for the next chapter I'm loving this and love the first 2 chapters and can't wait to see the 3rd chapter to come out

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Just posted the next chapter! Have fun reading!

7650665 ok couple thing I love about this chapter 1.Shadow Thunder now going on a date with starlight
2.The jaw dropping reaction was Hilarious :rainbowlaugh:
3.Rariry nearly fainting even more funny :rainbowlaugh:
4.Pinkie Doing a poster Hashtag of it :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:
And 5.Inferno straight forward yelling out hoe many more forgotten brother does Ace have! :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:


Now for future chapters thinking ... now this is getting me to thinking about... A.how would Shadow Thunder and starlight date would go and B.will Starlight start to feel a change of heart and not go through with this after the date and C. If Burst his friends and Ace do find out about Starlight true plans... will they or will they not tell Shadow Thunder when they eventually know that he loves her and/or knows that he was on a date with her

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Just wait until next chapter! Starlight will make her first move!

7650704 oh boy can't wait to see the next chapter then... but if you don't mind I would like to preidict something that might be happening

7650715 I'm going to make a pridect that Tiamus will feel his friends Critias and Hermos Are in pain and Ace will probably feel the pain Aswell as he is bound with Tiamus and probably somehow Ace will get both Critias and Hermos and save them in a duel... but just barley saved Critias and Hermos And Ace will tell Burst Inferno Sunset and the others about it and that's how they will know about it but Shadow Thunder will be the only one that won't/doesn't know about it

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I'll say you're on the right track, but I'm not going to spoil anything.

7650729 well at least I'm on the right track at least...

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Sorry. i just don't want to give away any of the good stuff.

7650736 I agree with you on that I can imagine it's going to be good

7650736 and I can see why you don't want to spoil it

I just have two small things to tell you for future chapters and that is Desk Rebellion Dragon attack is called Treason Discharge and that Starving Venoms attack isn't Venom Blast it's called Venom Flare.

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Thanks! I haven't seen Arc-V much since it got taken off nicktoons. Thanks for the info!

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Just finished the latest chapter.

7652254 Amazing chapter Ace really took down starlight and her Malefic dragons and rescued both Hermos and Critias and now they are reunited with Tiamus and now a part of ace deck now.. well until they fully recover that is and regain there strength...now that they know who Starlight and what her plans is they have to be ready for anything ... well now it's just the date between Shadow Thunder and starlight and Burst Ace and the others find out about shadow going on a date with starlight and they start to think about what they should do on if they should tell him.. or don't tell him and if they don't find out about Shadow Thunder is on a date with starlight will she start having second thoughts when she is with Shadow Thunder while there on there date?.. guess I'll find out in the future chapters but overall Amazing chapter can't wait to see the next one

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Things are gonna get intense next chapter!

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I should be able to work on the next chapter tonight.

7652398 Yay!.., can't wait to see it and at somepoint The card Legend of Heart will appear in Ace deck allowing Pay 2000 LP and banish up to 3 "Legendary Dragon" Spell Cards with different names from your hand and/or Graveyard, and if you do, Special Summon that many "Legendary Knight" monsters with different names from your hand, Deck, and/or Graveyard. You can only activate 1 "Legend of Heart" per turn. That would give him legendary knight timaeus (Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. Must be Special Summoned with "Legend of Heart", and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. When this card is Special Summoned: You can target 1 face-up Spell/Trap Card on the field; banish that target. When this card is targeted for an attack: You can target 1 Spell Card in your Graveyard; Set that target.) legendary knight Critias (Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. Must be Special Summoned with "Legend of Heart", and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. When this card is Special Summoned: You can target 1 face-up Spell/Trap Card on the field; banish that target. When this card is targeted for an attack: You can target 1 Trap Card in your Graveyard; Set that target. That Set card can be activated during this turn.) and legendary knight Hermos (Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. Must be Special Summoned with "Legend of Heart", and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. When this card is Special Summoned: You can target 1 face-up Spell/Trap Card on the field; banish that target. Once per turn, when this card is targeted for an attack: You can target 1 Effect Monster in your Graveyard; until the End Phase of your next turn, this card's name becomes that target's, and replace this effect with that target's original effects.) and finally Tiamus Knight Of Destiny! ("Legendary Knight Timaeus" + "Legendary Knight Critias" + "Legendary Knight Hermos"
Must be Special Summoned (from your Extra Deck) by sending the above cards you control to the Graveyard, and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. (You do not use "Polymerization".) Unaffected by other cards' effects. Once per battle, if this card battles, during damage calculation (in either player's turn): You can make this card's ATK and DEF become equal to the ATK of the monster on the field with the highest ATK (your choice, if tied). When this card is destroyed by battle: You can Special Summon 3 "Legendary Knight" monsters from your hand, Deck, and/or Graveyard, ignoring their Summoning conditions.... IM
SO HYPE! After reading a new chapter of YuGiOh EQG 5! I get super hype excited about what's going to happen next because I really really really loving the 5th YuGiOh EQG Story!

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Someone's pretty hyped! I wasn't planning on including the knights, but I'll consider it if I can fit it in.

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