Apologies for everyone, this will take a couple of days to get all the introductions to characters out of the way, but after that it all gets good fast!

Not bad. A little short, but whatevs.

You're off to a good start but I don't know if I'd go so far as to call Applejack the most popular pony in all of ponyvillie, I think that title might go to either Pinkie Pie or Twilight.

ALL RIGHT SPIKE! Or spikes kid? Spike better have hooked up with Rarity! Honest its the only guy I see for her. Of corse he would have to growen a bit first.

Im liking this story so far.

Well, it's off a promising start, at least. I don't quite think the names are quite right for ponies, but what do I know?

I'll be waiting to see what you make of this, good sir.

NOOOOO! GRANNY SMITH PASSED AWAY? NOOOOOOO! (If you read the "NOOOO's" in Spikes voice then you're a boss) Par that whole-sob-Granny Smith passing away I enjoyed it; keep at it!

very good...very good, but please do continue my main man...

Thats the intro to reunion right?

So Fluttershy ended up with Big Mac. I always perferd FlutterDash but that wouldn't work for this story at all. I like how on the pic you could tell who kid is who's. Looking forward to more

>>845167845167 why yes it is! i was saying from the begining of that the story it was to test the intro to this story

>>845298845298 glad you are enjoying it and yes i do quite like flutterdash too but i do prefer straight dash

Slight problem... Equestrian naming convention would require them to have two-part names. Am I correct in assuming this translates to them having larger names more aligned with canon naming style, such as "Archimede's Screw" and "Ruby Carbuncle," or did you just not bother?

woo hooo, new story to wait for, its been a while since I have had one of those

>>847586847586 full names will be explained later in story, when all intro chapters are done gimme a comment if you still think they're week just don't wanna give away spoilers

>>847816847816 that's cool. I'll get to this when I feel like reading MLP again. currently perusing the stockpile of How to Train Your Dragon fanfics I've amased on FFN.

>>847871847871 no worries

ALLL RIGHT SPIKE!

Ruby must be an interesting sight.

So Ruby is still a baby huh?

>>852054852054 interested as to how this will develop now?

>>852106852106 You betcha.

>>852413852413Woohoo! Already done the key part of writting by creating interest! Hope you enjou the rest!

Im kind of hoping Dash married ThunderLane

I'm actually really loving figuring out all these different ways the couples have gotten together Now which pony couple do you think we'll see next? (Hint this chapter just said they're going to the library) I PROMISE YOU WON'T GET IT RIGHT! (and no it's not an OC couple ) start thinking back ground ponies

Twilight and the Doctor

Twilight and dis... nononono never would happened uhm... dunno

>>855830855830 Twilight and Big Macintosh perhaps?

>>855830855830 Favorite and I say one of the best Shipings:

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And despite a little weird is still good

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>>856149856149>>856345856345>>856441856441 heheheheeeeee, Nnope! all fair guesses however

more hints ? plz

>>859333859333 Nnope! xD feeling dead mischevious today so no more clues you justgotta wait till around five tonight xP

>>859805859805 awww... it's an original character from the series but this guessing is getting me mad caramel top and twilight ?

>>859843859843 I really don't think you'll get it, simply because it's a couple paring that I've never seen before in the shipping genre

>>859895859895 damn btw  how the buck can you get pages out in a matter of hours ?

>>859900859900 I write the story well in advance of releasing, allowing myself pleanty of time to keep writing the next few chapters while i release a chapter a day was about 7 chapters ahead when I released the first chapter

>>859934859934 damn you are a freaking maniac in writing

>>859949859949 I'm passionate about it! I love the show, and I love writing, so I love writing all these stories!

>>859960859960 the same here it just doesn't seem like that i have the time since i get a task from my mom or friends keep calling to ask if they could come over for an gamer night or something like that or my friends invite me to a party at someone house just to feel comfy if they don't know everyone else except the host (edit) it's just that i love it all

So next is either Fluttershy or Pinkie Pie, why do I have the feeling that Fluttershy has been paired with Big Mac?

God dam it I can't pronounce Archys full name leave it to Twilight to name her kid something complicated

Cute little love story, I say Pinkie should marry Caramel.

>>861275861275 Caramel? Naaaahhhh, that'd be too boring next chapter's paring is a lot more fun than that

>>861269861269 hmmmm.... could it be due to the mass generic romance that so many writers have colaberated to form within the My Little Pony Fanfiction Zieckgeist, of which I have also contributed?

(Translation of me trying to sound smart= Is it because I wrote a big Fluttermac ship fic before this and said it would be their story for this one?)

>>861275861275 Archimedes NO!

>>861309861309 how about with Fancy Pant he's a boss and i don't think its been done.

>>862956862956 I could never do that to dear Fleur! She's on of my top fave random ponies! Id never take fancy pants from her! but i like your style!

AWWW now i know how to declare my love to someone

Discord and Pinkie Pie, hm intresting and now we have Fluttershy's child, and I'm guessing the father is probably Big Macintosh.

I still find it hard to trust Discord, although I could happily give him a 2nd chance.

>>872691872691 you shall be interesting to watch throughout this story very, very interesting!

DISCORD ........I like the way you think too

So seed loves ruby huh. I wonder if a half pony half dragon hybrid and a pony make a normal pony. Kinda of ironic that Fluttershys kid likes flying. Angelica really couldn't you think of anything more you know........pony?

>>877512877512 Well technically Fluttershy is one word for a name..... but avoiding that, yes I struggled with a name for her, but I think it still suites her

So Applejack dosen't wear her hat anymore huh I guess the stress of running Sweet Apple Acres has really gotten to her, and now that we've seen each of the new characters what happens from here?

>>877571877571 "Mom?  You named me after a rabbit??"

>>878932878932 YES! THANK YOU SO MUCH! That exact cenario whent through my head when i first came up with the name!

And so the war begins, Chrysalis has teamed up with a draconques (probably Discord) to conquer Equestria, and now both Appleseed's and Thor's fathers are missing.

>>885962885962 SPOILERS TO EVERYTHING THIS GUYS JUST SAID EVERYBRONY! also dont you mean Seed and Archy's fathers?

>>887232887232 Eeyup.

>>887232887232

I haven't read the story yet, but I think I know who each pony is.

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>>861275861275

To say Archimedes, the ch sounds like k, and the e's are long. Or, just watch Meet The Medic and listen for the name.

>>894369894369 ooooooooohh, SO CLOSE! Yellow pegasus is angelica, and the female unicorn is Ruby, but all the rest were spot on! :)

>>894626894626

Normally, I'd think that Angelica is a fitting name for Rarity's kid. It's just that Angelica sounds a little more...elegant...than Ruby. I just didn't take into consideration the Fire Ruby scene from "Secret Of My Excess."

"You remember Apple Seed don’t you sweaty?”

unless she sweats a lot, that should probably be sweetie. or something.

>>904007904007Face hoof! Hold on a sec and it will be sorted

No not Vinyl Scrath, why did you have to kill HER?! (You made Fluttershy cry shame on you!)

>>906773906773Needed to make the tragedy obvious so i took a massive fan fave and made it seem like nothing to make it that much worse. Glad to see it worked!

>>906985906985 Octavia is going to be so mad with you for THAT!

>>907673907673 ... who do you think the yellow mane'd gray pony was? 'cos you may want to murder me if you guess it right. Here's a hint ()

>>907987907987 Not Derpy TOO, who else did you kill off?!

Not Changelings ?!?!     New villains?

>>908600908600 Yes i'm very likely going to hell for this!

>>908814908814 The creature that Archy saw... Unlike any changeling he's ever read about before... By far one of my fave OC's I've ever made!

>>908600908600

Don't worry. I'm pretty ol' Celestia or Luna will open up a can of whoop ass on their killers.

>>908878908878

Yea, Dying Armor(Interesting name, BTW) caught my attention real quick.

Oh Dam quite a intense chapter. So DISCORD IS EVIL AFTER ALL HOW DARE HE PLAY WITH PiNKIES HEART. ........ Could it be a different draconequus?

Also if i were you ive would of killed off one of the mane 6 for extra drama

Yay Zecora this was quite a important chapter. Im curios for why  Seed didnt have a Element and what Element Sweetness is. So Discord is evil. Wonder how Sweetness will take it she's so much like her mother.........mabye she'll snap

So now we see the new elements, I think Seed is just being really thick headed and that is interfering with the potion or maybe it's the fact that he is harboring a crush on Ruby that he hasn't revealed yet.

Twilight had a sex change?!

Twilight couldn't bring himself to look at him, only at her hooves.

Other than that, this is really good! I applaud you good sir\madam!

>>930732930732Thankyou so much will edit it in a minute, and i'm very much a sir

"found their special somepony's"

Editing fail.

Nice going there author now we have no idea what Sweetness' element is OR DO WE?!

>>947698947698 I'll let you in on a little secret, have you noticed a hint when it comes to Sweetness that would suggest an element of some kind?

>>947773947773 Maybe it has something to do with her being able to see the good in everyone no matter how bad they may have been?

>>947860947860 Nnope! but that was something i considered when brainstorming the ccharacters

>>948111948111 Darn it!

>>948111948111 Maybe it's hope.

This is a great story, but can I ask, how did you make the cover art? I'm trying to make one for my story, and need a smidgeon of help...

>>958227958227 Well I got it from the username 'Inoeitall' I designed the characters, and he designed the picture

Sorry, if you're gonna talk to him, I'd suggest soon, as he is leaving on the 25th for two years!

P.s. Im glad you're enjoying it!

Ahem...

SPIKExRARITY!!!!

That is all.

No.

Just no.

No Rainbow Dash and Soarin'.

Rainbow Dash belongs to Ferrum,

(Read "Just Dropping In" and you'll agree with me.)

Nooooo Zecora So Discord might be evil or he may be not. This story keeps getting better

No thank you.

It's an odd writing style, not too realistic. I don't particularly enjoy this story, but I don't hate it enough to downvote it.

>>964786964786 fair enough, thank you for giving it more than a glance at least, at least you gave it a chance

Big mac gave them a problem I would think Spike would be the worst. Dude has his own built in armor and weapons

DISCORD what ever did we do to make you take over the ... PIE

>>965097965097 very nice!

Oh yeah, it's spelled "iris", not "irus".

Just to let ya know

>>904035904035

Discord isn't a chimera. Chimera is body of lion, tail of snake(with head), has lion head and goat head right next to each other(only goat head breathes fire.)

Hello, I have some news. I regret to inform you that I have reached chapter six, but I shall not be continuing this story. It's not that I don't like it, but it is not flowing right for me. It is simply missing that one element(I'm not sure which one) that ropes me into it. I am sorry.

I'll give it a thumbs for effort though.

Killed so far:

Derpy

Vinyl

Zecora

Jeezums,  who won't you get to? D:

I think Sweetness knows what Archy and Thor were about to discuss, I think secretly she knows they're right but she doesn't want to admit it or maybe it's something else.

*sees that discord is the father*

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