"What's the matter Davie?" <--  Pinkie Pie + Hal (2001: A Space Odyssey)

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Rarity's an ass.

The fuck????

This is good so far keep it up

Heh lovin' it so far!

not bad keep it up , but you never,EVER make fluttershy cry!

This is really unique.

It's not a generic "insert fic" (not that I hate them, but they do get repetitive) but it seems like a fun adventure. keep it up.

Next chapter will get funnier and have 20% more Pinkie Pie. I Pinkie promise.

well he might be crazy but who knows they might only be seen by bronies

yay new story. i was kkinda hoping you would continue prisoner of freedom, but this is great too!

>>829810829810 Oh, I'm still writing that too. Same with Rum Raisin Brandy. But since this story doesn't have such long chapters, I can post it from my phone. So, yeah, expect more from Shackie too. ^^

I sometimes imagine them when I get bored at work, but I don't talk out loud to them.

>>830482830482 Poor David has no choice in the matter, though.

Bwahahahahahaha love the ending of the chapter

This I like.

Thor: ANOTHER!

I would have used the pic, but I'm typing this on my PS3.

Wat.

what happened to rarity & how come you haven't mentioned applejack yet?

>>831195831195 >:3

>>831244831244 IT'S A LION GET IN THE FUCKING CAR!!!

...why did everyone suddenly turn into a pony? I have an idea as to what is happening but would rather not say it

>>822179822179 My exact reaction

LUNA Y U CAUSE SO MUCH ANNOYANCE?

I've had it with these cliffhangers!

>>840860840860 I HAVE HAD IT WITH THESE APPLE BUCKING CLIFFHANGERS ON THIS APPLE BUCKING STORY!

I laughed so hard at the beginning of the chapter at Pinkie's song that my friend came running in to see what happened! His reaction at what it was was priceless! It was like mixed with a little .

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Everypony strap in. 'bout to open some 4th walls.

YiHah! First comment for this chapter!

but weird so he was there yet not there kool

Didn'texpect Discord, I had it in my mind it was all Pinkie's fault

pinkie pie keeps demolishing the 4th wall! knock it OFF! please

>>859300859300 4th wall? She's looking at David, not us... well, since we are viewing from his POV, it could count. Maybe.

Discord you funny son of a umm whatever you mother is

>>861675861675 Maybe part of her is a dog?

I cant wait to find out what john does...

P.S. first

P.P.S. you lost the game again

Wait... I'm feeling too lazy to check, but isn't the narrator's roommate's name John?

>>865719865719

Haha his roomate found AJ

This can only end well. Just wait until she finds the Slim-Jims and jerky. I think Applejack needs a Redbull.

Oh, dear. We've got about three different levels of shit-hitting-the-fan going on AT THE SAME TIME here.

I shall prepare my anus for the shitstorm that is to follow.

>>874848874848 Gross. Accurate, but gross.

>>874848874848 seriously, that is disgusting gross

Besides that the chapter was actually pretty funny

damn looks like rarity found your porn:

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Hah, great story so far. Manipulative Rarity is best Rarity.  

I really enjoyed the timey-wimey scene with Discord earlier too. Good luck with your computer/internet issues.

>>874848874848 and that avatar pic's face doesn't help at all. I agree though,

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Hm.... Sounds like a descent into insanity. Or magic. One of the two.

...Two words.

Mind. Fuck.

Insani-ception!

This is cool I like it! I think I would like and could handle seeing and interacting with pony's. Hanging out with the Main 6 would be tight like a tiger.

oh snap