When Rainbow Dash is tormented by recurring nightmares, she turns to Twilight Sparkle for help. But Dash may not be prepared to find out who she truly is...
Based on a True Story. I mean, on a concept album by Dream Theater.
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44320 Why thank you, my good man! I'm workin on the next chapter now, but it'll be a few days. college n stuff.
more please.
44925 On its way
but im so far disappointed with what i have for chapter two that i may rewrite half of it. so that'll take a bit of time, but not too much. with any luck it'l be up before the end of the week.
oooh! the plot thickins
hmmmm I wonder what will happen next guess I'll have to wait for the next chapter hope it won't take to long to write
50405 it shouldnt take as long. im not closing every night this week
50391 you think THIS is plot-thickening?? wait til it REALLY gets going!
oh, and random note- I meant to name her Victory Wing, but i accidentally wrote Victoria for the next few paragraphs, so i was just like, ehh lets roll with it.
I'm intrigued... keep this one going.
niceI like it
sorry if these chapters are taking a long time, or going too slowly. there's just a lot of dialogue, which i hate writing, specially when theres no action or plot-describing going on. i figured i'd post this just so you dont all forget about me
should be more interesting stuff soon, the semester's almost out. 
as always, i love feedback and comments, so have at ye!
I like it so far, now to read another story till this one updates, can't wait.
wow... sorry for the wait, anypony who was following this. i missed getting it up before the new year by one minute...
ah well. i expect new chapters will be up A LOT faster, now that ive gotten out of my literary slump (stupid EqD 
) but yeah.
bit assassin's creed with the whole memory thing but thats cool im liking it still not seeing were the romance comes in
You might want to go find a guide on when to use those commas. Quite a few of them are unnecessary.
100195 mind telling me which ones? there wasnt a whole lot of standard writing in this chapter; it was nearly all dialogue. and in dialogue, at least written dialogue, commas are used to show a pause in speaking. its not imperative that they be grammatically correct. all the commas i put in the dialogue are merely so the reader can understand what the characters are saying, and their voice inflection and so on. if you found comma mistakes in other places, please inform me of them. i shudder to think that i may have missed a few in this completely rough drafted, never-edited story of mine. not to brag, but seeing as i nearly aced the grammatical english portion of the ACT's (35/36, which is nearly unheard of), i think i know where commas go. so please, by all means, tell me where my mistakes are. i wouldnt want my reputation tarnished by silly mistakes.
100156 romance is later. its not too in-depth, and its certainly not clopfic, but it exists. give it time, this story needs to play out. im tryin to keep my cards close to my chest (like, i-put-them-in-the-inside-pockets-of-my-trench-coat-and-zipped-them-up close
) for this story
This looks interesting, even though I'm not much into any kind of shipping. (Tried to read Double Rainbow but it didn't thrill me.) I'll start reading in a bit after I clean my room, do some laundry, write some DAH, etc.
137900 its not groundbreaking shipping. it's definitely tolerable, and not mane 6 related at all.
The chapter is called regression but there is no regression in this story, I'm confused.