The Empire of Harmony is a unified coalition of various races who joined under the banner of Princess Spike, who lead the combined forces in a battle to defeat a powerful tyrant, and has since been the world's biggest and longest running society.
Big Macintosh is an Earth Pony visiting the city of Canterlot, the capital city of the Empire, on urgent business (and a little sightseeing), however little does she realise she's going to end up at the centre of a race to save the world as an ancient and powerful enemy returns from the past, filled with anger and hate....and power.
Approved.
Good concept.
i like it!
7611132 yeah well YOU WOULD!
I am joking of course, thanks : 3
While this is an interesting concept, my one complaint about it so far is that the characters who are girls in this universe have the same names as their mane universe male counterparts.
It's not a problem with the story, just something that's probably going to bug me everytime this gets updated.
7626869 yeah well XD its just how things go here, just roll with it
This looks like a really interesting concept and I'm excited to see where you go with it.
7907538 thanks friend : 3
And yeah, the name thing still bugs me.
It also doesn't help that I read this chapter just after I finally read the epilogue to the Rainbow is Magic season 1 finale story.
But this was still an interesting chapter now that I've finally gotten around to reading it.
7950642 no worries : 3