Needing a break from her busy life in Equestria, Twilight is back on the other side of the mirror. A sleepover at Pinkie Pie's seems like just the thing to help her unwind. The occasion also gives Starlight an opportunity to enjoy life outside of her comfort zone.
Sunset, noticing that her friend is worried, helps Twilight confront a long standing problem. Together they hope to forge a better future for all involved.
Now has an awesome reading with awesome VA's at https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=051e-17mxm8&t=574s
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That was an enjoyable read, though a bit fast at the end. You've got a like and a fav.
7604605 Thank you very much. Sorry for the wonky pacing. I didn't want the end to draw out because I felt it would get into a whole other story. Which I may write at one point. This was just a small cap off. I felt it worked, sorry if I was wrong. If you're talking about the conversation before the immediate ending, then that's just how I felt it would flow. Sorry.
Anyway, thanks for the comment. Have a nice day.
Great Story! I hope we get what happened in the therapist.
7604842 If I have ideas then yeah. This fic wasn't really planned though. It basically evolved and grabbed my fingers while I was typing.
Thanks for the comment. I'm glad you enjoyed. Have a nice day!
Huh, this was certainly an interesting tale. I can see the different previous plots you talked about (from EQ sleepover to Starlight in EQ to this). Good job writing it up so quickly after last week's episode, I always like the idea of Sunset interacting with Starlight (though that will unfortunately never happen on the show), and yeah, Starlight could use some more serious help than another of Twilight's lists.
7605196 Yeah, as much as I like Starlight she really does need something. The more I think about it, the more I wish they would do an episode on Twilight being overwhelmed by her. I think this fic just ended up being written itself by some of my feelings on the matter. Hehe, whoops.
Sunset and Starlight interacting would be a real treat, but they seem to want to keep EqG and FiM separate. A shame yes but that's what the show staff have decided.
Anyway, thanks for the comment. Glad you enjoyed. Have a nice day.
I really like their interaction, and the topic of Starlight going through a proffesional help is brilliant! I throughly agree with you that Starlight definitely is dificult character with her exageration, and this would definitely helps her..
7605248 Glad you enjoyed. Thanks for the comment. I love Starlight but she is... the nice way would be quirky, the honest expression would be bonkers. Probably why I like her actually. :P
Thanks again, have a nice day.
Is... is that a reference to Dr. Wolf?
Didn't know RD liked Skyrim. I wonder if she plays vanilla Skyrim or modded Skyrim...
7605431 I was wondering when someone would catch that. Yeah it is. Just something that I decided to put in because I enjoy his content so much. Plus whenever I think of the therapist Starlight would go to, it's Dr. Wolf's voice.
7605468 I would imagine she'd dabble in mods but I think some of the conflicts would have her tearing her hair out. This story came to me when I was playing modded skyrim soo... maybe? :P
7605509 She's definitely playing vanilla Skyrim. If she was playing modded Skyrim, there would be more detail plus she might have an alternate start mod installed so she can have more ways to create her character or something. Modding takes more work because you have to make sure you don't have a lotta mods at one time, tweak the load order, stabilize the game and a whole lotta stuff. I know from experience since I'm a decent modder at this point. There are so many mods for pretty much everything. From weapons to spells to quests, it's also tough trying to make sure they're compatible with each other and your PC and that's for the mods. You have to do extra work to make your game look better at the cost of performance and to find the right ENB for your game. Newer PCs can handle better graphics, while older PCs can only go so long with low graphics.
Sorry to have bored you, but I wanted to give out my two bits.
7605541 Yeah that's about the jist of it. I've modded my game up a storm and... it's a process. I can't actually imagine Rainbow Dash having the patience to wait on some of the bigger downloads. Though I can see some of her friends dealing with the modding aspect for it. As in they mod their own games then update Rainbow's when they find a set up that works. Sunset or Sci-Twi I can see maybe getting into the more fickle side of modding, delving deeper.
Modded or Vanilla, Skyrim is still good. I was playing this off as if the game had just came out in their world,
7605557 Not surprised that Sci-Twi would be patient enough to mod her copy if she has one. Actually, now that I think about it, I can also see Sunset doing that, too.
7605257 yes! I agree. What a nice, pleasant feeling when you realize that someone had the same headcanon as you!
Hello, I'm Jacob M. Keene, and I'm a voice actor. I just wanted to notify you that I did a reading of this fanfic on my YouTube channel. I narrate and also voice Fluttershy and the Therapist at the ending, ItsAnnaChloeM voices Starlight Glimmer, Wubcake voices Sunset Shimmer, LillyLeafVA voices Twilight Sparkle/Rainbow Dash/Applejack/Maud Pie, TrueSailorComet voices Rarity, and Aquee voices Pinkie Pie. I hope you enjoy it!:
7860965 Okay. Dude, you have basically just fulfilled one of my goals/dreams for writing on this site. Have one of my stories read on youtube. Thank you so much! I'll go watch/listen to it now.
7861134 Glad I could help fulfill your dream!
I saw the reading on YouTube and the pace was a little fast for my tired mind, so I came here to read it myself. Not a bad story. Going to listen to the reading now and then the therapy visit done by Dr. Wolf.
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7938669 A little too fast paced, eh?
7940071 Okay now that you're here and before I forget...again! Do you want me to link the reading in the description of this story? That way people can find your youtube channel through this story, as it's already happening vice versa. If you don't then that's fine, I just thought it might help.
7940071 I was just really tired is all. I was impressed with the VA cast you got together.
7940136 Sure.
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7940138 Got it, and thanks!
I'm getting ideas to animate this in a collab with others.
8530613 Huh, fair enough. That's cool. Tell me how it goes.
8530635 The same way the story itself goes. That's my explanation in a nutshell. Yet, I'm thinking about Amante56, Agrol, ForgaLorga, Nightfall Studios, no1c00l, etc to be the collab partners for the animations, whichever of them would be interested.