A curious customer enters Rarity's boutique offering a trade of fabric and gems for just a moment of her time.
A moment she won't ever get back.
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Queen Sanguine Dreams
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All I got to say is CREEPY AS HELL!
Oh My... I thinked that It want her love, not all her memory.
7601257 you Said it
Nice.
Loose Fur is an interesting shady character. How does one defeat an enemy and you can't remember what they did? ~spoo00ooky~
... *facepalms at the name pun* Ow...
Nice story, quite creepy.
This story was kinda creepy... But what made it creepy wasn't so much as losing a happy memory... but the fact that this reminds me very much of the Dr. Who villains the Silence. The fact that they make you forget every time you look away and you won't make the connection till the tally marks appear on your arm make this story worse in a way. Horror isn't about blood and gore but subtly... Losing happiness and the memories of what makes us happy is probably scarier than anything else in this world.
It's a good thing this happened to Rarity and not someone better or I would have been a lot more miserable here
"Loose Fur Loose Fur Loose Fur"
OWWWWWWW that's good
7602430 How, indeed?
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Before I read it, what is the Dark tag for ?
and how bad does it get ?
Wow.
I agree with what 7601257, 7601419, and 7602828 said: this was quite creepy and unsettling. It is like literally "stealing a piece of someone's soul". Those memories, the personality growth, her mended, strengthened relationship with Sweetie all irrevocably damaged and lost forever.
It is especially distressing if you have ever had people close to you suffer from early onset Dementia/Alzheimers
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I do not know if you have read this or not, but since no one has responded (at time of writing) to your query...
The [Dark] tag is there for some rather disturbing implications the story ends with. Nothing overt mind you, but it does imply that Rarity lost far more than she bargained for and her relationship with Sweetie will never be quite the same again.
This Author keeps impressing me. This ling caught my attention with "Necromancy For Foals" so I thumbed through the other stories. I'm not a starwars fan, and a pet changeling in the human world, something about the concept doesn't appeal to me. so I gave this one a shot. For a short story, this is phenomenal. This could very easily be a "Twilight Zone" or "Night Gallery" episode. Make no mistake, this is right up there in quality with those writers.
Ok, now for some personal thoughts. Filled to the gills with spoilers. Read the story first
In my understanding of the universe, a Demon would give you exactly what you want. The issue is that what people want often is bad for them and ruins their life in some way. Were this a demon, the box (In my opinion) would have remained rare items, however Rarity would have either wasted them on bad ideas, or would have no ideas on how to use them. (The cliche trope could have been the box being damaged or ruined beyond use through fire, tea/coffee spill, or ink. But this is too cliche for our modern times.)
But this does not happen. The box is revealed to be an illusion covering trash. This indicates to me that this is not a demon, but an actual pony or HIE type character. Also the concept of having to steal memories in order to live till the next sun rise, is also a fascinating concept. Loose Fur as a character, if non demonic, must have a fascinating back story.
I seriously urge the Author to consider my musings and bring back this character in some way.
The Monk
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It probably did happen to someone more important, it could even have happened to you.
Loose Fur = Leland Gaunt? still, this story is unique, magnifique, short, sweet, and bitter, like a bit of dark chocolate.
Fantastic work.
OH HECK ITS THE RED MAN! Uhhh pone.
Like a Goosebumps-lite story.
Wasn't expecting that but yes. I do like it.
Probbaly one of my favorite stories on this website. Short, but it really gets your mind going.