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Sunset Shimmer, Twilight, Pinkie Pie, Applejack, Rainbow Dash, Rarity, Fluttershy, Spike, Discord, Big Mac, Apple Bloom, Sweetie Belle, and Scootaloo go to the fall formal at Canterlot High. Then they discover three cannibals and figure out who they are.
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*Sees story on new stories list*
Huh. That's not something you see everyday.
Let's just say this: i.imgur.com/3CFcHZU.gif
Not insulting you or anything, just saying that this is not the kinda stuff I read.
Well somebody likes The Walking Dead video game.
Seriously man, this is practically a copy and paste of part of the The Walking Dead video game.
I couldn't get past the first few lines. You really need an editor on this.
Why not just do the entire walking dead game instead of this? It would make a lot more sense. Unless this is just a troll fiction.
Why does this story have so many dislikes? I mean, it can't be that bad, right? ...Right? You respond to comments by moving your mouse over to the right hand side of the comment that you want to respond to and then clicking on the >> that appears.
Just a note: You don't use double punctuation in dialogue. If it's a statement, just leave it at a comma, no period. If it's exclamatory, you can keep the next word lowercase without using a comma.
"I can't believe it!" she said triumphantly.
"Did you guys hear what was going on?" she asked the group.
She couldn't believe her eyes, "Just what do you think you're doing?!" She was stunned at the scene before her and numbly made her way across the room.
"Look you guys, I don't get it, but I'll roll with it," she said.
Just as some examples.