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Oh man. The haters are out today. Each story I checked mysteriously had two more dislikes. Good job on the story though.
This was a sad story. It was really nice to see Rainbow try and live her life without her best friend. Still,
says it all.
fluttershy is one of my favs however this story wasnt. i enjoy sad stories but this one wasnt sad enough. could have improved how she died and more of what rainbow dash did to help. what killed it the most was how fluttershy is an angel at the end i dont approve of that stuff. i will say one thing most of the stuff done wasnt totally like rainbow dash just she needed more confidence.
This is the second saddest story in a row. This story made me sob more![]()
It made me think of my family when they pass away i will never see them again.![]()
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I knew by the title I was gonna cry.. but I ended up bawling. This story was so sad, but it's one of the best I have ever read.
Thank you everyone for your opinions! I'm thankful for all of your time on reading this and giving your thoughts towards it. ![]()
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awesome work now if you'll excuse me i have to go mop up the puddle of tears







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