Hearts and Hooves Day is a fun holiday for most. Candy, heartfelt gifts, what's there for a pony not to love?
However, when a young filly named Cinnamon Bun doesn't get so much as a card from anypony in her class, it's up to Ebony Stars, her batpony friend, to cheer her up.
But, as the years go by for the two, what started off as an anonymous love letter he sent to her in the guise of a secret admirer may develop into something much deeper.
Commissioned by Anonymous.
Cover art by DLowell.
Chapters (3)
I keep trying to give this its first like but the counter doesn't want to appear. Grah!!
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Doesn't show up until the 10th
7625594 Well, that was easy.
Well, I'm emotionally tied to these foals now... Tracking, and have a Like while I'm at it.
Normally I'd avoid reading completely OC stories because of the no... preexisting emotional connections to the characters from the show. But I gave this one a chance.
I was not dissappointed. Sad it's every couple weeks or so... but i hope for another chapter soon.
7661426 True, but i assume he has to work with the guy who paid for the commission.
Either way i'm loving the story so far and can't wait to see where it ends up
Now to wait for more, darn it all...
This is getting better and better with each paragraph. I am very glad I decided to give this story a chance, for I do not regret it.
Loving this!
Wonder what the 7 stars mean.
Also anyone else see the picture of ebony and think tuxedo mask?
Maybe I'm showing my age.
Ok. Im invested and I love the characters. I need more!
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It's comin'. Still working on chapter 3.
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Oh no, it's coming. 5k words so far. Just spent some time to work on this one story I'm releasing I'm releasing soon in celebration of a thousand watchers.
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This one has already been looked over by a friend. Once the clock strikes midnight here on my end, it'll be out.
finally! waiting for months!
*finishes reading*
NOOOOOOOO!!!!!! not again!
Man....my heart can't take these moments. I honestly think I could die reading these. I was hoping for the reveal. Don't hold out for too much longer! I might die lol. My heart raced scary fast.
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Or will it end happily...
Is he too far in the friend zone?
Will Ebony Continue the chrade?
WILL TRUE LOVE FINALLY WIN OUT!
Or will he be rejected, and heartbroken?
FIND OUT- NEXT TIME ON DRAG- i mean, ON BLOOMING ROMANCE!
I have never wished so hard for a Bat Pony to use the fangs he was given at birth before. God in Heaven, I'd have taken a chunk out of his snout if he would have touched me or my belongings. I despise personalities like that Unicorn's, creatures like that shouldn't have been given the gift of life.
Well, I implore you to grind out more soon. This chapter left a terrible taste in my mouth. I look forward to more.
7865741 I feel the pain! And now I know how my readers feel...
7813508 When's the next chapter coming out?
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Currently working on another commission at the moment.
Good story. Will continue to read.
Ebony, there is something very simple you can do. Write a peon of Cinnamon and write at the bottom Swain found the one he gave her. And leave her another white rose
Darth, considering how much of a self-important swine this Swain seems to be, I rather think that would be a little counterproductive to being a good friend to Cinnamon, and as one could tell from the first chapter, Ebony is quite the protective one.
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Swamped with commissions at the moment, but if I had to guess, a month and a half. Maybe two.
I just wanted to thank you for writing this story. It may come as a shock to you, but the third chapter was inspiration to a story I have created over the last seven months. No, I am not here to advertise, I swear. I am a person who loves to give credit and even inspiration where it is due. Thanks. I mean it.
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Which story did this inspire?
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Seconds Late. In my auther's notes I give you my thanks and link this story. It's my newest story.
When will this continue?!