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A story of the Lunaverse. After months spent in the care of Corona, the Tyrant Sun, Spike has had enough. He strikes out on his own, leaving the insane alicorn and his friend Zecora behind. But it doesn't take long for Spike to encounter somepony new, a unicorn pony on the run from the law who seems to have a few screws loose...

First Published
27th Jun 2012
Last Modified
14th Jul 2012
Riz
#1 · 121w, 2d ago · · · Chapter One ·

Hello there, I saw you fic and read it's description and it got me interested in your fic. An alternate universe fic ? I love it, hope the new chapter will be out soon.:pinkiesmile:

#2 · 121w, 2d ago · · · Chapter One ·

Looks promising.

#3 · 121w, 2d ago · · · Chapter One ·

Hi, Twilight :twilightsmile:

#4 · 121w, 2d ago · · · Chapter One ·

>>818278

http://www.fimfiction.net/index.php?view=group&group=760

#5 · 121w, 2d ago · · · Chapter One ·

Hm. We'll have to see how this turns out.. :pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

#6 · 121w, 2d ago · · · Chapter One ·

Hmm. I really should learn how to hyperlink stuff on this site.

Anyway, this is my first ever story submission to Fimfiction, and it's part of the Lunaverse, RainbowDoubleDash's alternate universe where Celestia became evil instead of Luna, and the Elements of Harmony are a completely different group of ponies led by the Great and Powerful Trixie. It's gathered quite a few stories, and this is the latest.

If anyone here hasn't read any of the Lunaverse stories, GO AND START READING RIGHT NOW. It's awesome.

#7 · 121w, 2d ago · · · Chapter One ·

WOOT this will screw up some of RainbowDoubleDash's fics for shore (insert discord emot here)

#8 · 121w, 2d ago · · · Chapter One ·

I was hoping it would be Screw Loose, But i guess twilight is cool too.

Riz
#9 · 121w, 2d ago · · · Chapter One ·

>>818464

Will do at once Sir/Madam !! :rainbowdetermined2:

#10 · 121w, 2d ago · · · Chapter One ·

I'll have to give this a read later on, but this seems pretty interesting. The spelling and grammar seems to be worth my time as well, so I'll give feedback as soon as I can.

#12 · 121w, 2d ago · · · Chapter One ·

Popping this on my read later, looks good.

I'll have to check out the Lunaverse especially if it's what I think it is!

#13 · 121w, 2d ago · · · Chapter One ·

>>818464

That anchor looking button on the tool bar will make links, or if you want to do it the hard way the formating looks something like this...

(url=http://www.fimfiction.net/index.php?view=group&group=760)The Lunaverse(/url)

...jsut with brackets instead of parentheses

The Lunaverse

#14 · 121w, 2d ago · · · Chapter One ·

Oh, this is... interesting. Sad too, if you think about it.

#15 · 121w, 2d ago · · · Chapter One ·

Dun Dun DUNNNNN...

- Will be doing the contributor, adding, etc. thing in a moment.

Man, Spike's life sucks no matter the universe. Stupid phoenixes. Phoenixi? Phoenixen? I don't know what to call multiple phoenixes. I do know that the adjective is phoenecian, though.

>>818627

Unlikely since it's part of the canon and me and Hendy have been PMing back and forth on this.

>>819263

A bot! God it's been awhile since I've seen one of these. Hello, bot!

[gets out sonic screwdriver, starts sonic'ing it, examines screwdriver]

Um.

Don't take your eyes off of it.

#16 · 121w, 2d ago · · · Chapter One ·

But as the purple coated mare circled him, still looking at him with that appraising eye, he realized that he kind of doubted it. Spike kept catching sight of her cutie mark as she passed him, it looked like an exploding purple star, and Wpike wondered what that said about her. Was she about to explode at him?

You accidentally spelled Spike with a 'W' there.

#17 · 121w, 1d ago · · · Chapter One ·

Quite a few minor spelling errors but that really doesn't take away from what looks to be a rather solid story.  Looking forward to the next.

#18 · 121w, 1d ago · · · Chapter One ·

:pinkiegasp: She knows him?

This will be interesting! Though some of the stuff mentions means I'll have to change some stuff about a fic I'm writing. Not gonna take too much work though.

#19 · 121w, 1d ago · · · Chapter One ·

How does she know....?

#20 · 121w, 1d ago · · · Chapter One ·

looks interesting i'll keep an eye on this one

#21 · 121w, 1d ago · · · Chapter One ·

Well, I am most definitely going to have to look into the Lunaverse!  Seems like a pretty awesome alternate universe!  :pinkiehappy:  On the topic of this particular flick, you definitely have my attention!  Enjoying the way this was written!  Can't wait to see where you go with this one!  :raritywink:  Definitely going to be looking out for new chapters!  Keep up the great work!  :twilightsmile:

#22 · 121w, 1d ago · · · Chapter One ·

Oh, my. I wonder if this is before or after Elements of Insanity. Ah, well. I guess Spike is fated to keep watch over the poor loon, isn't he? :fluttercry:

#23 · 121w, 23h ago · · · Chapter One ·

>>825075

After. Definitely after.

#24 · 121w, 23h ago · · · Chapter One ·

>>825126

I would assume that it did not go well. Her elements of failmony might have become friends but since she won't admit that she needs a social life, she missed the point. We know that M!Applejack will react to the lonely, angry, miserable mare L!Applejack is with pity and horror because she knows herself well enough to see why her counterpart is that way. M!Twilight will look at the crazy pony L!Twilight is also with pity and horror but not quite know why.

#25 · 121w, 12h ago · · · Chapter One ·

I would only at it to Watch, but this site doesn't alert me, so looks like it's getting favorited as well.

#26 · 120w, 5d ago · · · Chapter One ·

How the hell does Twilight know Spike's name?

#27 · 120w, 17h ago · · · Chapter One ·

Cool and it's also part of an alternate universe series, cool x2. :rainbowdetermined2:

Guess I'll spend the rest of my time with the Lunaverse stories now.

#28 · 119w, 6d ago · · · Chapter Two ·

Okay, I used Emeral Bookwise as a beta for the first chapter, but I'm going to forgo that for this chapter. No offense dude, It's just that I want to see if I can put out quality stuff on the first try.

I'd say more... but I need to go to work right now. :twilightsheepish:

#29 · 119w, 6d ago · · · Chapter Two ·

>>867926

No problem, not like I actually helped out that much last time anyway.

#30 · 119w, 6d ago · · · Chapter Two ·

Poor Spike... Hopefully if he does end up in front of P. Loony, she'll hear him out.

#31 · 119w, 6d ago · · · Chapter Two ·

Oh, goody. The Elements of Insanity clearly 'failed' her so she's going to throw Spike under the carriage in order to save her plot. M!Twilight would probably want to kick her so hard, her grandchildren would bleed.

#32 · 119w, 6d ago · · · Chapter Two ·

"THERE LONY, ALL OF THEM"

#33 · 119w, 6d ago · · · Chapter Two ·

You know, it suddenly strikes me that canon Spike's job as Twilight's assistant would be the perfect community service punishment for L!Spike, serving as one of L!Trixie's assistants. Or would that count as cruel and unusual?

#34 · 119w, 6d ago · · · Chapter Two ·

poor Spike.....

#36 · 119w, 6d ago · · · Chapter Two ·

>>870140

There is one thing you should regret...

The YEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Is supposed to come after he puts the glass on, not after he takes them off! Everypony knows that.

#37 · 119w, 5d ago · · · Chapter Two ·

Oh, this is a bit of Lunaverse freeze, seeing two friends like that... and seeing Twilight nuts too.

As for her own Elements, you never know. Maybe she thinks they need a mascot?

#38 · 119w, 4d ago · · · Chapter Two ·

This story is an excellent example of alternate universe!  lol  Keep up the awesome work!  Definitely want to see where this one goes!  :pinkiehappy:

#39 · 119w, 4d ago · · · Chapter Two ·

>>877444

Thank you, and remember to check out the rest of the Lunaverse.

#40 · 119w, 4d ago · · · Chapter Two ·

Oh, most definitely!  :rainbowdetermined2:

Riz
#41 · 119w, 4d ago · · · Chapter Two ·

>>877745

YAY !! New chapter !! When the next chapter be out ?

#42 · 118w, 6d ago · · · Chapter Three ·

That Phoenix is totally spying on them for Corona.

And I findit funny that Twi and Spike seem to be slowly becoming friends.

Even across the multiverse, some things don't change.

#43 · 118w, 6d ago · · · Chapter Three ·

Well I can't describe how much I've been waitin for this so I won't even try. But this was a good chapter.

#44 · 118w, 6d ago · · · Chapter Three ·

moar:pinkiecrazy:

#45 · 118w, 6d ago · · · Chapter Three ·

The Lunaverse burn is going to hurt so bad when it hits. :twilightoops::raritycry:

#46 · 118w, 6d ago · · · Chapter Three ·

>>910068

I find it more likely that the phoenix is trolling them for the heck of it.

#47 · 118w, 6d ago · · · Chapter Three ·

>>910149

It might not...

That Phoenix is totally spying on them for Corona.

Maybe...I'm sort of wondering if it's just a phoenix. Corona doesn't necessarily seem like the spying type.

#48 · 118w, 6d ago · · · Chapter Three ·

>>910413>>910431

I do admit that I amlooking into it too much.

But Ialso don't buy intothe phoenix dragging the trolling/mocking for this long. There has to be a reason...

#49 · 118w, 6d ago · · · Chapter Three ·

:twilightsmile: D'aww...

#50 · 118w, 6d ago · · · Chapter Three ·

>>910441

Boredom is a cruel beast.

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