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DwarvishPony


Human. Writer. Bearded. Feel free to chat with me.

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Octavia's life is fantastic! She's got steady work around Ponyville, she's able to live in relative comfort away from the stress of Canterlot, and she's got a marefriend that lights up her entire life. Or at least she did with that last bit.

When Octavia's marefriend suddenly breaks things off, Octavia's life spirals out of control. What was once a happy life slowly starts to break apart, showing the mare just how bad things had truly gotten. With the help of a few close friends though, Octavia sets out to win back her ex and fix her life. But to do that, she'll have to fix the other issues that have been plaguing her longer than she realized.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 9 )

The emotional part of me hates you for writing this because I adore Vinyl & Octavia stories and I like seeing things go well for them.

The rational part of me concedes that this is a fairly well-written piece of literature that I'm probably going to enjoy regardless, and it's definitely something that I don't see often. It's still a little early to have a strong opinion, but you've certainly got me intrigued. Looking forward to seeing what you have in store for them. All they want and more, hopefully.

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I'll agree with you on that flashback but in chapter 2. It's been bugging the stuffing out of me, actually. As for the bits you mentioned about the break-up, if I get the chance I may elaborate and expand on the conversation.

Such a sad chapter. :( But overall it's a really good story, and I look forward to seeing what happens next. :)

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I'm glad you like it so far. :twilightsmile:

I beg of you... Update this...

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Soon. I've got most of the next chapter ready. I'm just trying to hammer out a few details on it.

Comment posted by Mellow Mirth deleted Dec 7th, 2016

7777394 Thank Celestia! :rainbowlaugh: I am looking forward to it! :pinkiehappy:

P.s. I messed up on that first comment, my bad. :facehoof:

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