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While hiding from her sister's latest attempt to smarten her up, Sweetie Belle joins Rainbow Dash and Scootaloo at Ponyville's local river to have fun in the cool water. Together, they come up with a silly story explaining the origin of the infamous "Beauty Curse", a blight Rarity apparently suffers from.
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I'm gonna go out on a limb, and say that this likely makes it to the featured box.
This was neato.
It was nice to see them all bonding together. But if I got busted I'd be out of there.
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This was a cute story.
I will definitely look forward to more I the future.
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It's very kind of you to say so, though in all honesty I doubt it will.
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Thank you very much!
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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Tis true: Hell hath no fury like a Rarity scorned.
Thank you all for the comments. Each and every one is appreciated.
Well that was a fun story!. I really enjoy seeing characters that aren't normally seen together interact. Sweetie Belle sending time with both Scootaloo and Rainbow together is something I don't think I've ever seen before. I agree with the earlier poster that I could see this hitting the feature box.
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I'm surprised at how rarely that combination's been done on FIMF.net too, at least ignoring ones where the entire CMC are present, and/or where you get the full Applejack-Rainbow-Rarity trio present too. What I liked about writing this scenario was the challenge of imagining how Sweetie Belle would manage without those other characters (Applejack, Apple Bloom, and Rarity for the most part) there to shape the proceedings.
And thank you also for the nice comment!
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Thank you!
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7576557 Tbh, this feels like it could be an actual episode. Filler, but still.
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Nah, I'm just pulling your leg.
Seriously, thank you for the nice comment! It's much appreciated. 
7863180 I like your attitude. As much as your stories.
I may not have anything good to comment (such as constructive criticism), but I just love the light-heartedness of it all.
7598236 I don't really see how an episode of the show could be considered filler, since it's mostly a Slice of Life show to begin with.
This DOES feel like it could be an episode of the show, though.
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Thank you! I'm glad you think so; to be so compared is high praise indeed.
Eeeee I loved this!! Adorable and perfectly in character. Keep up the good work!! ^_^
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Will do. Thank you for your comment.
That was cute.
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I'm a year and two months overdue, but... thanks!
This was a really nice and fun journey! Ordinary fantasy can make something amazing out of everyday things) I like this type of the stories and I hope everybody save piece of this magic on the entire life.
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That is certainly a sentiment I can get behind. I've tried capturing that "extraordinary out of the ordinary" feeling a fair few times, and I think this was one of my earliest attempts at it.
Also, I really liked the idea that Sweetie Belle, Rainbow Dash, and Scootaloo would make it up as they go along, and each one would try to shape the story the way they wanted it to be. I'd love to write something like this "everyday adventure" story again sometime.
such a cutesy story ahahahaha yes lovely my dear ack