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Lucefudu 223741

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    Left isolated in this crimson space of nothingness.

    Only the darkness keeps me company, but that is not enough.

    I've observed happier folk that do not suffer like me- Why am I not one of them?

    I wish my rage to consume over my boundaries.

    I will soon bare freedom, and smother the galaxy with my bare emotion.

    Then I will not suffer alone.

    Emotion... will exist no more!

    First Published
    26th Jun 2012
    Last Modified
    26th Jun 2012

    Comments ( 24 )

    #1 · 47w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Musical Credits:

    Why is 0² the white one?

    Why is everything else black?

    #2 · 47w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>810777

    Why is 0² the white one?
    I think it's because it's trying to look like an angel and faking it.

    #3 · 47w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>810777 And you say I'm the better writer... HA, this goes beyond what I could ever hope to do, you silly filly. Amazing job once again.

    #4 · 47w, 1d ago · · ·
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    so will this continue or is this it?

    #5 · 47w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>814094 Is the story marked as complete?

    #6 · 47w, 1d ago · · ·
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    yes....

    #7 · 47w, 1d ago · · ·
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    such a pity since i wanted to continue

    #8 · 47w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Wow... I dont really know what else to say other then "Good". Makes you think, no?

    #9 · 47w, 1d ago · · ·
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    this.. uhm.... sure was a story. :twilightoops:

    #10 · 47w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Huh...

    Well, I get the feeling this has something to do with 02, but I honestly can't see much of a connection to MLP at all...

    #11 · 47w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>814766 Then read it again.

    #13 · 47w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>810777

    Why is 0² the white one?

    Because it is a oxygen molecule

    I'll leave now

    #14 · 47w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Kind of hard to follow along at first. It still didn't make much sense to me, but you get an A for effort. I won't thumb it up or down. I remain neutral.

    #15 · 47w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>815290 But when ultra-violet radiation hits the 2p^4 orbital of the Oxygen atoms that form the molecule, they go to an hyperexcited state and, since such state is volatile, the electron is forced to is previous low-energy state, sending forth a kind of wave of its own; one with the wavelength of about 475 nm.

    (TL;DR: It's blue.)

    >>815293 It's OK. But I'd just like to say that it isn't a random, nonsensical story. It's more like one of those stories you have to think a little to fully grasp what it is about.

    #16 · 47w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>810777

    Come on dude, if you're gonna post music at least use the high quality version:

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iOVzFJPVrDs&feature=related

    #17 · 47w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>816629 I actually preferred the other vers. But that is fine too, I guess.

    #18 · 47w, 1d ago · · ·
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    This is too dark and trippy for me, I'm afraid. :twilightblush: But it certainty is interesting!

    As you can see from Dash's Tears In The Rain, I prefer my dark fics to have lots of shades of love in them, with more of a grey-tone than a purely black one.

    So... I don't know with the mods. Did they kill this story or what happened? :rainbowderp:

    #19 · 47w, 1d ago · · ·
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    HOLY SHIT! Zero-Two is the force behind the stars? Shit just got real.

    #20 · 47w, 1d ago · · ·
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    On a related note: I believe this mix would go well with the story http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l6yL3qQUDYQ&feature=related

    #21 · 47w, 19h ago · · ·
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    TL;DR

    #22 · 47w, 19h ago · · ·
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    >>820125 URE JUST DOING THIS CUZ URE JELOUS OF MY ASPERGER'S-TIER AUTISM POINTS! I'M CALLING THE MODS ON U!!1

    #23 · 46w, 9h ago · · ·
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    I don't know what this is...

    ...but I kinda like it.

    #24 · 33w, 1d ago · · ·
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    I love this story but its not very pony related, It is related, but just barely.

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