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Bar Only the Mind by n

Dark Random Adventure

Applejack opens a bar at the request of her friends.

Requested by Sine_Wave

First Published
26th Jun 2012

Last Modified
26th Jun 2012

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Ayojedi

#1 · 47w, 3d ago ·

This is really good! :pinkiehappy:

I love the concept!

Mevpone

#2 · 47w, 3d ago ·

Freaking trippy. I liked it... A LOT! :rainbowwild:

N64Fan

#3 · 47w, 2d ago ·

Very nice, I got a Bastion-esque kinda feel around the middle that I have really never seen in a story. In short, I liked it. Good concept.

Zytharros

#4 · 47w, 2d ago ·

:twilightsmile: That was a cool story.

Sine Wave

#5 · 47w, 2d ago ·

Huzzah!

bookplayer

#6 · 47w, 2d ago ·

Really good! A very nice job on writing a dream, those can be hard.

GandhiOwnsYou

#7 · 47w, 2d ago ·

I enjoyed it, and the concept was interesting. Definitely unique, different than most Applejack stories i come across. I've gotta say though, it felt rushed to me. I think a little extra room to breathe would have made the whole idea a little clearer. The scene shifts were tight enough that they felt jarring in an unpleasant way rather than just quick enough to get the point across that things were happening suddenly.

Church

#8 · 47w, 2d ago ·

I feel like every story I read of yours, I'm just going to end up saying "Great job! Loved it!"

so... uh... great job! Loved it!

Spark of Inspiration

#9 · 47w, 2d ago ·

What you smokin' bro? Just kidding...

Still, this was a strange work. I've never seen anything like it before, and it really catches my attention. (I'm not sure whether that's good or bad, but either way, I'm glad I read it. I needed my daily mindbuck.)

-SoI

DJ GarV the Expert