Soarin and Rainbow Dash have been dating for many months now. She is a professional flyer and one of the top rookies in the wonderbolts, while he helps train her to be the very best of them all. One day, after a long day of training, she does not show up at the lockers. He goes to find her and the two share a personal yet bonding moment between them.
Even if the situation is awkward to begin with.
Rated T for sexual references, mostly involving breasts. Nothing else other then that.
I would like to thank my editor Stellar Spiral for making this story to be the best to its ability. Also special thanks should go to SilverShield73. He taught me a lot of shortening and helping me focus on what's important and what the story needs to help get it on it's path. We are both different in regards how we work on our stories, but he has my thanks in giving me helpful advise, and I am satisfied how this turned out.
Coverart was created by Unicorn Lord, who is a fantastic artist and I really appreciate his time for making this. Bonus art by another artist inside.
i liked it
and there's defiantly an option for a sequel
doesn't have to be any kind of steamy either
Good story. That's an insane amount of boobs.
''How he became her marefriend, that was something of a achievement on it’s own.''
WAT.... its either one or the other, cant be both unless your not telling us something
umm okay... i like SoarinDash as much as anybodyelse could but i couldnt get myself to read the whole thing for 2 reasons.
one i skimmed through and fist off Dash is really OOC shes not the pony that would say shes ''not good enough'' especially for something as simple as being in a relationship.
secondly this seemed like some weird PG13 tits fetish......like a lot of talk about boobs without saying boobs just reads very awkward.... like especially in the beginning.... many of the teammates have been together for years and have shared the locker room together for years..... after seeing each other naked that many times nopony is going to care what someones elses tits, dick, or pussy looks like for the millionth time and weather or not they are ''stared'' at.
not trying to sound negative or anything just that with just some changes it would make a very big improvement to the story
7601210 Thanks for that. There could be a possible sequel to it, now that think about it. But that idea might be for another time.
7601488 Thanks for that. Yeah it might get awkward with the naked ponies, but at least there covered.
7603363 Yep, in all shapes and sizes.
Glad that you enjoyed it.
7604077 I can see where you were getting at here. I understand that it's long and even a little complicated. I know this is PG-13 but I just wanted to keep it at that. I would tend to say boobs or cleavage or any other body part but knowing that I want to keep this in that range, I wanted to make so it's simple. I understand that things could have been a little different and more engaging but I was only trying to be creative and funny with the situation at hand. I will look into seeing if I can fix any of these concerns but I believe they are fine to me.
Hope you understand.
Also I don't mind what you have said and I take no offense. I got criticized a lot if I missed something and didn't fix it. So I learn and strive to be better and make a story the best it can be, and I always work hard to become better as a writer.
I do appreciate the impute and take this into account.
7604014 Wouldn't you like to know.
Omgggggg!!
*fangirl squeal *
That. Was. AMAZING
I do not like the way Spitfire treated Soarin.