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Epilogue
Several months after DOG had ''left'', Fluttershy gazed out her window at the night sky again before settling down to bed. "Goodnight Angel."
Angel yawned and waved a paw at her, then nestled down in his basket and began snoring.
The pegasus lay awake, watching the stars.
*Beep*
She leapt up out of bed and stared at the box on her bedside.
The screw inside stayed a screw, unmoving, and unbeeping.
"I must have dreamt it," she murmured and lay her head back down. Almost as soon as she had done so, she heard a noise and bolted upright again.
*Thud*
*Beep*
Fluttershy leant over and peered at the box. Which was missing. Her eyes snapped open immediately as she peered over the edge of the bed, and saw the box on it's side.
*Beep, tap*
She turned her eyes to the window and smiled.
The screw as upright and tapping against the window.
*Beep*
The pegasus got out of bed and carefully opened the window, allowing her piece of the giant to leave.
"See you later," she whispered and waved goodbye as the screw rolled off to the rest of itself.
The blue light flashed as it rolled through the grass, and down to Ponyville.
It passed it's statue on the way out of town. It stopped and beeped at the bronze version of itself, smack in the middle of Ponyville. Then it carried on it's journey.
It had a long way to go.
Far, far away, in the frozen tundra of the north, past the Crystal Kingdom.
*Beep*
*Beep*
*Beep*
Several body parts hopped, dragged, or any other way they could, moved towards the source of the beeping.
DOG, or more specifically, his head, opened his eyes and smiled.
The End.
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The first thing you kind of have to understand was that the DOG models were built to level planets, for purposes unknown. In fact, in the original script of The Iron Giant, it showed WHOLE ARMIES OF THEM landing on another inhabited planet, and proceeding to trash it into the Stone Age. Then the planet is destroyed, Alderaan-style, by a big ship glassing it. But besides that primal fear in the back of my head, this was fantastical. Memes!
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Image: http://i3.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/000/105/262/i%20see%20what%20you%20did%20there%202.pngBut seriously, that was awesome.
I'd ask for a sequel, but it was brilliant left where it was.
Few stories can actually make me cry. This and the original Iron Giant movie are two of them. As I write this I am on the verge of tears, and I am currently holding them back forthe sole purpose of being able to see the keyboard.
'Scuse me while I go cry my eyes out and sniffle for the next hour.
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Not sure if crying gif or yelling gif
You know, I was working on my own MLP/Iron Giant crossover on FanFiction.Net when I received a comment saying that there was another like my story on here. Upon hearing this, I immediately came to this site to read your story because I was thinking, "Oh crap, 
I hope I haven't copied anything!" To my relief, I discovered I hadn't. 
If you'd like to read my story on FF.net, please feel free. Here's a link if you're interested: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8387617/1/Fluttershy_and_the_Iron_Giant I liked this story and I hope my story will be as good as yours. Great job!
I always talk that sleep is for weak... so I read whole at once. And tears were shed even if I know exactly how this is going to end... great crossover indeed. Tomorrow I'm going to read sequel of this story and again.... waiting-fest for another chapter is going to start. Fav and like!
Edit: Funny thing... Giant was voiced by Vin Diesel ;D
I wish part Nine was more drawn out. Perhaps further description of the battle and its effects on the Giant could explain why he is about to go rainboom.
Viewers of the movie know what this Part Ten means, but perhaps you could elaborate more for people seeing this for the first time. For example, why is there a beeping screw in Fluttershy's bedroom? What does this have to do with the Giant? (In the movie, this piece was specifically pointed out as it was the last part to return to the Giant in the barn.)
Fluttershy's reaction at the end must have been something like this
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