A lone mechanist discovers how to create little machines that can think for themselves. A random bit of inspiration leads to the creation of a yellow mare, that was programmed too well.
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ZekeDraco
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ZekeDraco
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Wait, what? Fluttershy is a robot?
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Oh wait nevermind :/
43257 That is the most fitting picture you could have possibly picked.
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That was the greatest picture I've ever seen.
wow that is an interesting story I hope that it would be continue.
...
And that's how Equestria was made: In a Brony's workshop.
A little short, but powerful nonetheless. Have some stars.
Confound these ponies!
Having people write about stories about mechanists.
And those mechanists make a sad pony.
And then I cry.
And that's how Equestria was made.
In all seriousness though, that was a pretty good story. I really did cry a bit because of the attempted suicide-thing. Here, have a rating.
I...Sad...
You...you...YOU RUFFIAN, YOU SHALL PERISH. YOU USED THE MOST POWERFUL WEAPON AGAINST ME, TRAGEDY! I shall destroy you! It was amazingly written! That means -23 HP to me! It portrayed Godplay! That means -13 HP for me! You "killed" Fluttershy! That means -44 HP to me! And you had an amazing ending! That means -20 HP for me! Now, prepare yourself, for I shall murde-Owait,that means I'm dead. Damn.
We will meet again.
Wow.
Just wow.
You must continue it!
YOU MUST!
Pretty good read.
5 MIND BLOWNS out of five.
Moar pls?
Tracking, I look forward to more.
Tracking, awesome story so far.
Excellent
I think this chapter might need a revision; I was finding it very hard to follow what was going on, the transitions between dream and reality were incredibly abrupt.
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Agreed.
At the end where RBD, LG, And Zecora were suddenly talking to Celestia, I had to go back and make sure that I was, in fact reading it correctly. When did she show up? and it jumps form 12pm to suddenly being 5pm
I am confused, though awaiting the next with enthusiasm.
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I'll need to take a look at that a little closer, typing on an ancient PDA with an undo button dangerously close to the on-screen keyboard's space bar makes for interesting little gaps.
great
This........Confounds me..........
*Knocks on ZekeDraco's front door and he answers* "Hello?" "I love you." *Door slams in face* BEST STORY EVAH IM GONNA TRACK RIGHT NOW AND HAVE ALL MY STARS TAKE ZEM ALLLLLL!!!!!
MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRR
I don't... What?
I miss Flutterbot already
ZekeDraco, you have a serious italicization problem! You didn't de-italicize properly so now a large chunk of the story is all screwed up.
Everything just jumps from one thing to another too quickly with very little detail. Meaning the story was too brief. I like the plot, i really do, but i could hardly keep up with what exactly what was going on in the last two pages of the story. I will give 3 stars to be generous.
This depresses me, actually.
No fluttergear!!
am i stupid or is that ending confusing, i can't tell.