Vinyl Scratch tries to survive a night with Tavi, nobles, and a very rude bartender in the most dangerous/boring settings she'd ever been: a musical recital. Inevitably, everything goes wrong.
Vinyl Scratch tries to survive a night with Tavi, nobles, and a very rude bartender in the most dangerous/boring settings she'd ever been: a musical recital. Inevitably, everything goes wrong.
I loved the BBC documentary aspect of this. This was a fun read. Mi Gusta!
Cute, creative, and funny. Three things that can make a good story. Great job and keep it up!
Man this brings back memories of the old BBC documentries I watched lol. There should be a sequel!
The first half has some grammar issues throughout it, but the whole thing is funny enough that I'll give this a fave.
Documentary of tavi
Beware
(Enter beware gif pic here)
Some errors that perhaps need addressing, but otherwise most amusing indeed. You get a like.
8083495 Thanks! I'll try to get around to some revision as when I reread it the first time I realised how dire the need for corrections were. Even I did some cringing of my own.
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Hey, no problem! Keep honing your skills and stay delicious!
I narrated the parts in Vinyl's head with David Attenborough's voice, and it was hilarious. +1 and fave.
8092004 Thanks. That's the effect I was going for. XD
I never knew I needed David Attenborough to be ponified until now.
You have to write more stories!