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ExplodingDucks


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Vinyl Scratch tries to survive a night with Tavi, nobles, and a very rude bartender in the most dangerous/boring settings she'd ever been: a musical recital. Inevitably, everything goes wrong.

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:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

I loved the BBC documentary aspect of this. This was a fun read. Mi Gusta!:pinkiehappy:

Cute, creative, and funny. Three things that can make a good story. Great job and keep it up!

Tavis are known to be volatile towards their mates at the smallest sign of anything. They are more likely to strike if the action does if the action has absolutely no effect on their lives.

Man this brings back memories of the old BBC documentries I watched lol. There should be a sequel!

The first half has some grammar issues throughout it, but the whole thing is funny enough that I'll give this a fave.

Documentary of tavi
Beware
(Enter beware gif pic here)

Some errors that perhaps need addressing, but otherwise most amusing indeed. You get a like.

8083495 Thanks! I'll try to get around to some revision as when I reread it the first time I realised how dire the need for corrections were. Even I did some cringing of my own.

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Hey, no problem! Keep honing your skills and stay delicious!

I narrated the parts in Vinyl's head with David Attenborough's voice, and it was hilarious. +1 and fave.

8092004 Thanks. That's the effect I was going for. XD

I never knew I needed David Attenborough to be ponified until now.

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