In the middle of a My Little Pony / Kirby crossover – "The Antithesis of Harmony"
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A critical accident occurs during Kirby's most recent adventure. Instead of returning to Dreamland, he and his friends find themselves in a completely different world, a world where "friendship is magic". How did they get there? How will they leave? What are these "ponies"? Most importantly, what abomination has followed them into this world?
Contains spoilers for Kirby's Return to Dreamland.
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Took this story long enough to find its way here from fanfiction.net
oh boy....kirby at a pinkie party.
Hmm... now let's see... I'm gonna guess that Meta Knight is gonna meet up with Rainbow Dash...
Wait... What kind of power-ups will Kirby be able to use in Equestria? 
Exactly where will they come from? 
Well atleast Stone Kirby is going to be there... But I think Spike may be a little angry when some of his snacks goes missing...
moar plz
Kirby crossover? Interesting...
I'll be keeping an eye on this story for sure!
I shudder to think about Dark Matter in Equestria...
DDD is acting kind of like he does in Brawl in the Family.
>> Zennistrad
I'll admit to being a big fan of Brawl in the Family, but that's not the intention. A coincidence at best.
I remember this from fanfictin.net! Good story, really glad to see it get here!
I wonder what everyone's reaction is going to be to Kirby's copy abilities?
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Sorry, kinda too late for that. Meta Knight already encountered Zecora.
It would be awesome if Meta Knight and Rainbow Dash got in a fight though. Meta Knight would probably win though, he is the knight of knights after all.
one thing i forgot to mention yesterday.
since when did kirby actually speak?
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It's a liberty I had to take. If I were to use his "puyo" speech, how would you know what he was saying unless I were to slip his words in english in parenthesis or something? And if I did translate it, then what would be the point in having him speak in "puyo"? Having it written in one way for the characters and in another for the reader is completely pointless and it slows things down. So I decided to get creative and conceive a language for Kirby himself, to replace "puyo".
I must say, I can't wait for Kirby to show off his copying powers at some point.
Maybe does a smash bros style inhale and drop on a foal, leading to use of powers at max power?
Or if it's a unicorn, does he just get Magic? That'd be useful, he'd be able to get access to any of his powers from there.
Why isn't this more popular? Seriosly, this story deserves more attention.
oh dear god, pinkie and kirby baking.
nothing will get shared.
You're missing an e
YYYYEEEESSSS!!! It's finally here from fanfiction.net!
Thanks so much, Battery1320!
I shall follow this.
Been waiting for another chapter! SO GLAD THERE IS!
And let it be known that the end of Equestria began this day.......the day when.......-dramatic pause for effect-.....Pinkie and Kirby baked together!...........-sighs- We need a better way to tell the future generation how everything came to and horrible but oh so tasty end..."
This is pretty good to be honest.......I don't know WHY this isn't more popular at all it got good spacing. Spelling is pretty good, and no rushing around really as it built a bit like how the MLP:FiM episodes are like......some connect and have things to do with one another.......others don't at times.
-snickers and laughs for a good while- Sorry sorry I just love the part with tiny Applejack and Applebloom. I can picture that from the show and it always tickles my side......that and the voice Fluttershy gets from the whole mess.......makes me laugh pretty hard too.
I'm really impatient so... what's the abomination that followed them from Kirby's world? Galacta Knight? 0 or 02? Some other guy? Who?!
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Whatever it is that now watches over Equestria, the ponies will not like it. It has only one goal – to see the world in perfect peace, perfect harmony. But its harmony might be different from theirs...
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GAH! WHY MUST YOU TORMENT ME SO?
If I was the Waddle Dee, I would say
"With all due respect, I survived at least 3 of Kirby's adventures, I think I can handle a forest."[He was in MKR, RoK, and RtD, as far as I know.]
Hmm...interesting concept. I honestly think that this might be the only one of this genre. However, I believe I know what the 'Antithesis' is. I don't want to state it here, though, as it'll spoil it for everyone else.
Now, the story itself is well done, except for the earlier chapters. Sometimes it seemed almost as though you were just going through the motions of writing, particularly in the second chapter. Other times, it seemed like certain scenes were...off, guess would be the word. Like they'd been written and rewritten several times. It's a more common error among new writers than you might think. When writing a scene, don't think about it too hard. Just do it. Once you're done, you'll have a steaming pile of horse vomit(no pun intended), but a pile that was pure gold before it was vomited out. Then it's just a matter of piecing the whole thing into a coherent puzzle. The main thing to do is to get the material out.
Now, another gross metaphor: It's nice to have silk from thin air, but realistically? It's gotta come from the worm's butt first. In this instance, you are the worm's butt. Weave your silk, and I guarantee you that your writing will improve dramatically, in both speed of production and quality.
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That has got to be by far the most unique comment I've ever read. And that's with this story being on FF.net and DeviantArt.
As for my early work, I'll go ahead and admit it – I'm disappointed with myself. I was very foolish as a writer and didn't properly think/look them through. They basically wrote themselves, but they were weak and overall not well done, especially Chapter 2. After I finish Chapter 7 (which is nearly complete), I'll jump straight to revising the previous chapters. Chapter 1 will receive some touch ups in the weaker places. Chapter 2 will actually be completely redone, and what I plan to do with it would basically eliminate Chapter 3 almost entirely (resulting in Chapters 4-7 being moved back by one). Chapters 4-6, I think, are mostly fine, but not great; they could use some edits.
Thanks for the review... and the rather interesting input.
As much as I hate this episode, I still want to see more!
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Hey, there's nothing wrong with that. Return to Dreamland does set itself up for crossovers after all.
YAY! An update!
I've waited so long for the Mane 6 to meet Meta Knight! 
Should be "utmost"
Do you maybe mean "instant"
Rarity does not typically use words like "gonna"
The
BoulderDedede takes issue with that commentThis is probably nitpicking, but there is now way that Rarity would say it like that. Try "I'm afraid somepony will have to help me see ahead."
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Gah, how did that slip by me? Thanks for pointing it out.
Cancelled? Darn. I really liked this story. Oh well, good things come to an end...
Funny, I saw the episode this was based off today.
This story won't be continued?
813362 Its probably Magolor thats in Eqeustria I now shudder
Rip this story.