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Pineapple Skitter 532

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    An experiment to see how much prose I could replace "Applejack woke up and went outside where it was snowing", although I can't remember why. Also an experiment with first person Applejack to see how easy/fun she was to write for. You should probably read something else instead, but otherwise I'd love to hear your thoughts on it!

    First Published
    25th Jun 2012
    Last Modified
    25th Jun 2012

    Comments ( 7 )

    #1 · 47w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Wow, ain't she the grumpy pony :ajbemused:

    A perfect example of a Slice of Life fic. Great job!

    #2 · 47w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Lol, cute. Now i want apple fritters and i don't even LIKE apple fritters.:twilightblush:

    #3 · 47w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>807972 me too, andidk what an apple fritter is! I need you to keep writing before i go insane from waiting:pinkiecrazy:

    #4 · 47w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I love winter so much. Now I'm motivated to stop the seven stories I'm working on and go write one about snow... /scribbles it down somewhere.

    #5 · 47w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>808190>>807972

    (*HOW DARE THY NOT LIKE MY APPLE FRITTER'S*) (*hoof's a apple fritter to both of you*) NOW EAT!!! :trollestia:

    good story! I am Glad to have Read this!

    #6 · 47w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Apple fritters are delicious.

    Nice job capturing Applejack's personality, I really enjoyed this

    #7 · 47w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Isn't it amazing how much can come from expanding on one little sentence?  Very nicely done. :ajsmug:

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