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Pineapple Skitter 532

Joined July 2011
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    Pineapple Skitter's Stories (5)

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    Having failed in their latest attempted to gain cutie marks, the CMC wind up covered in tree sap and pine needles in Twilight's bath... whereupon the lover of literature suggest that they might try something less pine needlesque and tree sappy such as, say, writing. Gratuitous Luna in socks, miscasting Twilight, sticky Applejack/Rainbow action, and nth-wall breaking Pinkie Pie ensue.

    First Published
    25th Jun 2012
    Last Modified
    25th Jun 2012

    Comments ( 11 )

    #1 · 47w, 1d ago · · ·
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    I like this. Keep it up.

    #2 · 47w, 1d ago · · ·
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    *slow clap*

    ...

    *extremely slow clap*

    ...

    *super-duper slow clap*

    Fantastic. I'd love to say more, but my brain's a bit... yeah.

    #3 · 47w, 1d ago · · ·
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    It's looking good so far.  A couple of mistakes, 'here' instead of 'her'...and sometimes it's not perfectly clear who's talking.  I'm pretty sure Applejack isn't in this scene, and yet she's talking?

    Anyway, wondering where the story will go at this point.  

    #4 · 47w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Best ending ever.

    (You guys DO notice the 'Complete' tag, right?)

    #5 · 47w, 23h ago · · ·
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    This ending is best ending.

    #6 · 47w, 23h ago · · ·
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    Lol.

    #7 · 47w, 19h ago · · ·
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    "...and then they bucked." :trixieshiftright:

    #8 · 46w, 4d ago · · ·
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    my brain...

    #9 · 46w, 4d ago · · ·
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    that's awful.

    :pinkiesick:

    thumbs up!:applejackconfused:

    #10 · 16w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Pineapple Skitter writes? Gasp!

    Oh Pines, you so silly. :D

    #11 · 6w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Very goofy fun but it really felt like it moved too fast and ended too quickly.

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