Thank you all for the Feedback. Ive just realised i've made too many mistakes in this. With random appearances just coming here and there. Enjoy the rest of the story. And stay tuned for a remake.
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Sky Ranger is not your ordinary Human, he travels across worlds, while others just stay around
Earth and Mars. Its the year 2784, and he's a Star Ranger, an inter-galatic force protecting the Milky Way. But when he crash lands his best ship, The Aphelion, Onto a unexplored world completely filled with fluffy rainbow animals. Will we stop the war from destroying eveything on this unknown planet and come home?, or will he destroy everything?
Chapters (13)
well... looks good so far... keep going
i see your using bits of other games like Subnautica for the P.R.A.W.N suit, No man's sky for the Sentinels, pirates and massive alien lifeforms.
and most obvious Starbound for the logo and AI.
i like those game and by extent this story (even without those references i still like this story).
even with the small amount of words you have still chapter has me hooked, please keep up the good work, im looking forward to more.
Seems a bit too fast pace, but good.
7523385 Yeah, those are some of my Favorite games,
STORY SPOILER (SORTA)A ship called Aurora from Subnautica will be in this, im still deciding if i want to go the same path and send the massive ship into Equestria, or just it be some sort of path for Sky to return. Hopefully I can keep my hooves in place and finish the 4th chapter.
Cool story so far. But it's not evergreen its everfree.
Found a mistake
Then, the ship started to shaking
*shake.
I think the story is going a bit too fast
7526863 Thanks for telling me that, I just fixed it, I also changed the Evergreen forest to the Everfree. Thanks for the feedback.
7527715 no problem
Chapter 5 is out! Go read it!
wow the princess might be going to galactic court for taking out a startship. and come on the Aurora needs a break it already got shot down once over an unknown planet it doesn't deserve to crash once more.
She is not getting off easy for taking out a giant starship.
looking good so far... keep going
The rage for the Aurora crashing is real.
(THIS IS A DIFFERENT AURORA, NOT THE ONE THAT CRASHED IN SUBNAUTICA)
Sorry about the big wait people! I have a life too you know,
Anyway, I finished another chapter and planning to get two to three chapters out today! Stay pumped everypony!
wow... It sundely got really intense because of a misunderstanding...
Its annoying when you forget the reason that they're fighting.
I think i did a derp.
Hurrah! The next chapter is out! It was like 95% done during my weekends but I completely forgot about it
If Sky Ranger is human, then why does he have a pony name?
7556710 First of all. He doesn't. It is his FULL name. Sky is his First name and Ranger is his last name. Thank you for the feedback. But its slighty difficult to change his name after im so far in!
This story makes no sense. This escalated to an all out fight for no reason. Celestia and Luna would know about objects entering atmosphere burning up from meteor showers. They would also know the bigger the object the more damage it does when hitting. Why does the crew have to destroy Ponyville and Canterlot to take off? If the crew had just stayed on the damn ship and fixed it they could if been gone a long time ago. The engineering crew should have the ability to throw some breakers without the captain needing to be involved. A warship hull should be able to absorb way more damage then a single person suit could put out.
Thank you all for the feedback. I've made alot of mistakes and i'm going to remake this. Dont be sad about it being cancelled. Stay tuned for STAR-BOUND:REBORN
Well. Sorry to end the story in a bit of a shortie. But my good friend CupcakeSprinkles gave me enough motivation to finish off this. I had alot planned for this, and that will be involved into the remake.