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Nice work!

One small thing though, you might want to put in a page break between shifts in perspective, just to make it easier to understand.

>>808148808148 Oop!  Sorry about that!  Potential weekend project!  ^.~  I'm used to working with little to no formatting tools on ancient word processor programs from the mid-90s.  I got into the habit of massive chunks of space between perspective/scene changes for the simple fact that I found it far easier and faster.  Also might have something to do with that one-semester creative writing class I took in high school.

>>808026808026 The social recluse reluctantly accepts the invitation!  :D  He warns you, however, that participation in any conversations will likely be short and infrequent.  He DOES work for a living.

oshiiiiiiiiiiiiii! Must read next chaptar! Also... FIRST BUCKING POST.

Okay, *notbad* but I was hoping for moar :/ *reads on*

Emmm..... She have a foal, but anyway story like the most other going to “I don’t need a stallion in my life.” point. FoE stories are so predictable

>>832713832713 I wouldn't know about any of the others, because I've only read two.  ;)  As for this particular tale, it will take time before it really gets going.  It may yet surprise you (or it may not).

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Hehe okay, I am a one who had read not two, but all of FoE side stories. I REALY like to be surprised

Your story need "comedy' tag, realy. Good chapter

>>957463957463  I never thought to add the "comedy" tag, as I find humor in life to be a natural occurrence.  And the humor should help balance out the darkness to come.

If anything, the story needs a pre-reader or an editor other than myself, as I've already spotted at least two mistakes and a word omission since I put this up last night.  Alas, I have no friends and am a rather reclusive person, so I must take upon the duties myself.  It might also help if I spent more than just a half hour on the task.  >_>

good chapter

good chapter

Wow. I fuckin surprised. It is really well written. I like it.

>>12170811217081  It appears that I have surprised you after all.  :)  I hope I can continue to do so.

yay another chapter good one also

yay nice chapter. What can be more cute than mother's love toward her foal.

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Kittens.

Or puppies, if you're a dog person.

good chapter again looking towards the next one with Star Shine

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This mother/daughter pair won't be seen again for quite some time, unfortunately.  I'm rather slow with my writing/typing.  And I STILL haven't figured out a name for the mare!  @.O  

I must say it's unexpected chapter. I want to see where it's goes.

Prologue and an intro? Well then.

Well, fuckin awesome! Noxious cat!   Damn, life in stable can be not boring even without any invasion. And now shit hit the fan! Keep it up! I love your writting style.

>>19415531941553  Yes, cats can be awesome in their own strange way.  :D  That particular part was based on a rather lucid dream I had the day before I started working on the chapter (I work graveyard shift and sleep during the day).  It involved very similar circumstances on Christmas morning with this fifteen-pound beast of a Maine Coon cat we called Sparks when we first got him as a kitten on July 4th, 1996.  He was doing the same thing in my dream--dashing around, annoying my family, pouncing on the shredded wrapping, but when he leapt off the couch and right into a box, all this wrapping paper just came poofing out and I wound up laughing....and that's when I woke up.  Laughing.  I burned the dream into my mind and typed down as many details as I could recall later to make use of it, and it turned into the scene that starts off Chapter 5.

Sadly, Sparks developed a terrible chest tumor, but cats are very skilled at hiding potential symptoms of diseases and medical problems--my guess is that it's an ingrained ability that allows them to continue hunting and moving about without giving away their position to either prey or other animals.  We didn't even know anything was wrong with him until he started having trouble breathing and moving more than a few feet at a time.  Before that, we chalked up his increasing sleep periods and lack of spunk to old age as his breed is known to live an average of twelve years.  By the time the tumor developed to the point where he could no longer hide it, it was too late, and we were forced to put him down a week later on July 29th, 2008.  It was a little difficult writing that scene, but at the same time it also reminded me of all the laughs and joy he brought us, and was somewhat therapeutic even after all this time.  I'd long since dealt with it, but this still helped in some ways.

I miss that big, furry bastard.

Really looking towards the next, good chapter

Fuck.. Heh, awesome chapter. I never thoughts I will be sad, about her leaving from stable. Hm, still not get it, why anypony else tried to leave stable?   Fuck, it's unique story, it's needs more attention. You made damn intresting story, using only character's development and radroaches. And now, we have wasteland to play. Damn, poor Windy..

Wow this chapter was really good and what was that bear thing? Man bear pig?

Awesome chapter. Some raiders killing. Classic.   Funny to see El-tee trying to calm down her mother. Good filly. Hey, she is ten years old, and still do not know from where foals coming from? I just can't belive in that.

Great work, I love you writting style. Keep it up.

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Don't feed the yao guai!  :D

>>18634911863491  Do you mention this on every story with a prologue and an intro, Mr. Pleb?