It's one of these stories. Dipper and Mabel go adventuring, accidentally open a portal, blah blah blah... but what if this time it actually got interesting? Wars across space and time? Celestia and Luna's parents? Even more crossovers? Ancient and powerful relics? Muffins? Stancakes? Hidden Traitors? Backstories? Mike Schmidt? Yes sir, all these things are (or eventually will be) part of my story, and it's only the beginning.
No TwiDip. Actually, no ships at all! (YAY)
This is my first FanFic. Enjoy! (No, that does not mean this is a badly written story.)
Greatly inspired by these stories:
- The Effects of Gravity
- Return to Gravity Falls: The Equestrian Chronicles
(I am not copying their stories. True, I may have used one or two general ideas but the main plot differs from them A LOT.)
Rated Everyone but there is one scene where Twilight gets "woozy" on cider. I don't know where y'all stand on that so... just sayin (^-^)
Also: Just cuz I make a reference doesn't mean you have to put it in the Undertale group!! (>o<)
Hmm I like it
7487387 You have made my day
That Author's note was amazing . Also great job writing Mabel and Dipper
7500966 Thanks!!!......... I'm not kidding about the last part of the authors note
Transcendence AU is awesome, there also Equivalence AU, which is the same thing just with Mabel instead of Dipper
I liked the part with Stan. I love Stan but it was still a good ch
Are you continuing this story?
7546827 Of Corse I am!!!! I'm almost done w/ Chap 5!!!!!! I will neva EVA stop
You are such a good writer I'm can't wait or the next chapter to start.
7615457 Thanks!!!
FNAF?
7666723 Yay!
But that's not all....
I'll have you know that this chapter is NOT about fnaf. (Maybe the first line was a reference) but that is not what it is about. It is the future plot on my story. Don't give up on me so fast!
Oh you did that on purpose
I was worried that you posted the next chapter but the site goofed and messed it up...... That has actually happened to me before.
7669162 I've seen tooooons of goof-ups before.
this is with intention, my friend
7669162 Also making headway on part 2!!!
(You'll have to excuse my slowness however, I have a new story I have to keep track of too!!
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Fills you with a sense of determination
it's over nine thousand
it's not just a phone booth
I've never seen gravity falls and this is a nice introduction to it. Plus nice plot so far you should totally let twi turn them into ponies
7671359 Ahhhhh....
You are catching my references...
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You musn't speak anymore...
You're onto me!!!
7669175 That is okay take your time, and hey take it from a guy who updates like once in a blue moon that taking your time always equals a better product.
7673922 Thanks
This should have a comedy tag. It's hillarious.
7674409 Thanks!!!
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You're welcome. I still don't see a comedy tag though.
7674910 Okay okay fine...
#Lyra
To quote "The Pony I Wanna be (Reprise)" from "Crusaders of the Lost Mark".
make sure you do your research before you make broad statements like that.
About the supposed appearance of Mike Schmidt, I'm not certain but I think that name (along with Jeremy Fitzgerald) is actually just an alias for William Afton (AKA, the purple guy) who is one of the founders of Freddy Fazbear's pizzeria
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#1 Purple guys cover up name was Dave. Mike was someone else entirely
#2 Sometimes in the the show they say "give me a hand" instead of hoof. Ponies do not have hands. Or know what they are. The show makers make errors like this. I take this to be another one of those ( and also they had to make it rhyme somehow and that was the best way to go.
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P.S. Mike will only make a cameo. He isn't relevant to the plot
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7686791 I swear to god I did that on accident. That's very ... ironic
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yay
Uh oh.
Celestia's gonna freak out about the Twins or at least know where they came from.
That's not Celestia is it?
7697332 No it is
Why do I have the odd feeling that Celestia is really really really Pissed off?
Also:MOAR MEMES!!
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Your memes amuse me so
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NO!!!!! Bad author! Talking directly to the audience is a massive faux pa when it comes to writing a story (unless you're trying to break the forth wall intentionally but that's a completely different topic).
I recommend you change the line to this
It just works so much better
7709987 Thanks for the feedback! I need all the help I can get
I love this too much for my own good
7741464 thanks!!
If you read my most recent blog post, you'd see that I'm taking a short break from my writing of this story to work on my other one, but there's no way I'm calling quits!!! So stay tuned!
As long as it continues I can wait
Only have read two chapters and already love ig
7698402 Hope this updates soon.