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Hush Now Quiet Now

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Hush Now Quiet Now by Fluttershy[mlp:fim]

Tragedy Sad Dark Adventure

Fluttershy has been having terrible headaches tat are making her go insane. She can not get rid of them. Can she find a way to ver come her insanity before she hurts herself but worst of all....her friends.

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24th Jun 2012

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24th Jun 2012

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Fluttershy[mlp:fim]

#1 · 48w, 4h ago ·

it took me forever! And i hope you like it! :yay:

Chaos Light

#2 · 47w, 6d ago ·

You need to space out your paragraph. It hurts to read that monster of a paragraph.

DivineGlory

#3 · 47w, 6d ago ·

I agree with Chaos. Your formatting needs a bit of editing. Spaced out paragraphs for dialogue and new ideas is important. Other than that this can become quite interesting.

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