Let me retry...

this was a good story, good job, it'll probably get featured....

Also,

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>>803185803185

You really take the time just to reply "lol".

What great feedback.

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._.wut?

A work of GENIOUS! I... am impressed.

5/5 stars!

Oh, instead of editing my last comment I'll just take a moment more of your time to point out you forgot to capitalize the last sentence in your story.

Cool!

~Cosmic

I already saw the video, a while back actually. So....FAVORITE! AND LIKED! BEYYYYYYYYYYYYYYTCHES!

I liked the part where she ate the corn

The picture really did it for me. This is one of the better fics I have seen in my time of being a brony. This man deserves a corn and a pat on the back.

Joy. Just when the image was removed from my mind, you shove it back in.... THANK YOU!!!!

THAT WAS GODLIKE

>>803311803311 No way. The part where she ate the corn was MUCH better than that.

>>803471803471 Please the best part was when she ate the corn

>>803471803471 >>803311803311  NO the part where she ate the corn is the BEST part of the story.

aaaaaaaaaaaa

>>803518803518  >>803471803471 No the part where she ate the corn was much more dramatic.

>>803575803575 when she  stops eating the corn is the less dramatic part

Truly an enriching, and deep tale, deciphering and philosophizing the great secrets of the universe! I hope, with the hope this piece of the gods has bestowed upon me from it's content, that I will ever have such a chance to be bestowed such legendaryness after this piece of literature.

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Mother of Celestia...

FUCKING EPIC!!!

it was fun to see this in the popular stories while it lasted... better get back to my other pending fics...

The maker of the video asked me for the link to this fanfic so i gave him it...just he/she seemed pretty suprised that there is a 1.2k word fanfic about his/her video

>>815872815872

so what did he/she say?

Sweet Celestia, this is awesome.

>>820338820338

she/he just said "neat can i have the link" so i gave it to her/him and he thanked me after wards

lol more people keep asking for the link

i was moved to tears. i fucking love corn.

WHY WASN'T THIS FEATURED?!

Good show

>>830068830068

it did once went to the popular stories section but only on the first day of release... but still i'm speechless who would have thought it would get this much views after it dwindled down on the 2nd day...

Wanna know a funny fact? I don't even like corn that much.

Had the loop playing the whole time.  Still playing, in fact.

The civic duties of royalty don't get addressed nearly often enough in the show. :D

mother of god

Hi, I'm Zanthimos, Prince of the Internet and I approve this fanfic.  =]  

this is a 100% grade A troll story....you won an internet sir,

>>803185803185 You creep me out.

>>22797262279726

Why?

>>22815812281581 That picture...

>>22819992281999

HUEHUEHUEHUEHUEHUEHUEHUEHUEHUEHUEHUEHUE

>>22821152282115 http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p249/servomoore/Half%20Assed%20Monsters/GotoParty_zps7ee72220.png Mwa hahaha!

>>22822582282258

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>>22824022282402 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zA-lSdhy564

>>22824202282420

>>22840082284008 LOL