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Chuck-daddy 1437140

Joined April 2012
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    Chuck-daddy's Stories (14)

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    Chuck-daddy's Blog (37)

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    Everypony Grows Up by Chuck-daddy

    Romance

    I'm Rainbow Dash. I'm the best flier in all of Equestria and the embodiment of awesome, yet I can't make up my mind about my feelings for this filly.

    First Published
    24th Jun 2012
    Last Modified
    24th Jun 2012

    Comments ( 18 )

    Dimondium
    #1 · Chapter 1 · 46w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Well. Considering Scootaloo is grown up, I suppose it isn't foalfiddling, so I'm somewhat OK with this so far...

    Derpy Forever
    #2 · Chapter 1 · 46w, 5d ago · · ·
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    this is going to be good :scootangel:

    Path_of_cloud
    #3 · Chapter 2 · 46w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Well done. I particularly enjoyed how Spike and Rarity helped her come to her conclusion. It's a nice way of showing how even romantic problems can be made clearer with good friends to listen and give advice.

    Path_of_cloud
    #4 · Chapter 2 · 46w, 5d ago · · ·
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    It's a shame you don't have a more Spike and Rarity centric story for me to read to compliment this one :pinkiesad2:

    Chuck-daddy
    #5 · Chapter 2 · 46w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>803009 That's what I was going for. Thanks for reading! :rainbowkiss:

    Path_of_cloud
    #6 · Chapter 2 · 46w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>803018 :yay:

    adjutant stormy
    #7 · Chapter 2 · 46w, 5d ago · · ·
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    I love me some Scootaloo.  And this was an excellent take on their relationship.

    Keep up the good work!

    Derpy Forever
    #8 · Chapter 2 · 46w, 5d ago · · ·
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    yeah! tis is a good idea, i cant wait for more chapters. keep it up!

    Liamotfunk
    #11 · Chapter 2 · 46w, 5d ago · · ·
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    I'm not usually a fan of Rarity x Spike, but I'm glad that you were able to interweave their relationship into the story. Good job bro, here is one of my moustaches :moustache:

    EquestrianAnarchist
    #12 · Chapter 1 · 46w, 5d ago · · ·
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    MEIN GOTT. But, it's age progressed, so i'm ok with it.

    ToothlessandHiccup2
    #13 · Chapter 1 · 46w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Good job, diggin it so far, but is there gonna be more Sparity? Anyway, keep up the good work!

    ToothlessandHiccup2
    #14 · Chapter 2 · 46w, 5d ago · · ·
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    I have an explanation for Rarity dating Spike. Spike is young in terms of DRAGON years, but Dragons can live up to 1000 years. For all we know, Spike could be in his 20's in terms of PONY years.

    Frizzy
    #15 · Chapter 1 · 46w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Took her long enough to get her cutie mark.

    Chuck-daddy
    #16 · Chapter 2 · 46w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>821316 Well...yeah.

    Emberheart
    #17 · Chapter 1 · 11w, 6d ago · · ·
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    :rainbowderp: what

    what just happened?  

    :rainbowhuh: you know, I've seen people joke about how much Scoots likes Rainbow, but actually reading it seems weird.  Mostly because I still see her as a little filly Cutie Mark Crusader.  But seeing as she's all grown up, I wonder if Rainbow's actually going to go for it.  guess I'll just have to read the next part.

    Emberheart
    #18 · Chapter 2 · 11w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Good ending and story overall, I just feel like it was kinda rushed at the very end.  Reading it, I thought Scootaloo was still a bit mad at RD, but as soon as she mentions where to go for the date, she's all smiles.  

    So I guess my only critique would be to just take a few more sentences to keep the rushed feeling away.  It doesn't even have to be very many.  Maybe even like five sentences about the filly-fooler comment and a quick apology would have been perfect. Otherwise, yet another awesome short story of yours!  Keep it up!:twilightblush::pinkiehappy:

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