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It's Mommy's Special Day!
Normally, days in the Sparkles' house always start the same way. However, this day is not normal, and there are two ponies intent on making it the least normal day ever.
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Feeding Darkness
My name is Twilight Sparkle, I think. I'm surrounded by ponies who say things I don't understand. I don't seem to be able to move. And I can't tell them that. I may have a slight problem.
1,154 words · 351 views · 23 likes · 0 dislikes
Memory
My name is Princess Twilight Sparkle. I'm one of Equestria's corulers. Everything is fine for me, right? (Not Twilestia)
4,682 words · 622 views · 66 likes · 5 dislikes
Rain
There's a storm in Ponyville, and the local library has enough room for two ponies.
1,080 words · 881 views · 82 likes · 9 dislikes
Lunacy
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Two of a kind
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Excellence
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To Jack a Rainbow
16,372 words · 546 views · 23 likes · 2 dislikes
Splitting aMid the Night
166,587 words · 657 views · 54 likes · 10 dislikes
Hearing the Pulse
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Perception by Toraka

Slice of Life

Rainbow Dash is part of a very special organisation called the Brotherhoof. One day, she has to learn a serious lesson about friendship, about how we wants things to be and how they really are.

RD in an Assassin's Creed style plot.

Note please: The following stories are in the same universe; An unknown sensation, Splitting aMid the Night, To Jack a Rainbow, Two of a kind.

In addition, Strength and Perception take place in a parallel universe to that one, where things are almost the same, but not quite.

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24th Jun 2012

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24th Jun 2012

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Invisible Blade

#1 · Chapter 1 · 45w, 5d ago ·

EMNAS IS THE TRAITOR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I HAVE ONLY HEARD A TEMPLAR SAY "May the father of understanding guide you"

The first time I heard that was from Rodrigo Borgia

Toraka

#2 · Chapter 2 · 45w, 5d ago ·

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http://mylittlefacewhen.com/f/2567/

Not that I had made any particular effort to HIDE that he is totally not the traitor. Y'know. While I'm writing a response, think about it, why didn't Dash get intercepted during her second mission?

A brief comment on Emnas, first, Vidic says it to you in one of the Revelations Multiplayer cutscenes, which is where I got it from (Shameless person that has never beat AC2 that I am). Second, if you've played Kingdom Hearts, you'll notice that he uses quotes from Ansem. I was trying to find a good acronym for literally 2 days straight until I settled with this. I suppose that, in Equestria, Names would have worked. Only recently I've noticed what a clever pun I've missed out on. It'd have gone something like: 'His name was long, hard to remember, and definitely not cool. Something like Names' Acronyms. Whoever would name a foal that. Since the first day, Dash had just been calling him Names, so that stuck.'. With the pun being on that 'calling somepony names' is just one capitalisation away and has a different, but also possibly fitting meaning. Oh, how clever that would have been.

Toraka

#3 · Chapter 2 · 45w, 7h ago ·

I just realised I really screwed up with the continuity. Fortunately, I have a handy parallel dimension ready where I'm now moving this. The reason behind it is that Glimmer should really already be dead at this point in time. So she, instead of getting hit by lightning while foalsitting Twilight at Canterlot, simply moved to Ponyville sometime to be a more efficient mentor, THEN got struck by lightning not much after the events of this story.

The main plot has also happened in the Midnight universe, aka Emnas became Rainbow's first target and she is feeling really guilty after placing a feather on Scootaloo's parents' heads (Which I'll emphasise in Strength, Chapter 2), but you can't lynch me for details.

I could rewrite the characters and all to fit in, but that'd be quite a bit of work.

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