... This is interesting! Also: Voice is best character!

>>795305795305

Why thank you Neon. The voice is actually supposed to be one of my characters from my Deviantart account (Raythedeku) and if you look through my gallery you can guess which character I am speaking of. He's probably the best since he's so developed in my head after all those imaginary adventures from Adventure time to Banjo-Kazooie to Sonic the hedgehog to My little pony. His alicorn form will be named Majora by the way.

>>795330795330 Well so far he's my fave character! Also how long do you plan on making this?

>>795381795381

I plan on Making this quite long. I hope to put as many different Fanfiction themes into it as possible, including the younger ponies watching a show called My little human: Adventure is magic. When this one is done, the next one in the series will be a HiE starring a guy named Wren, and he ends up as a wolf in equestria, and he doesn't get home due to being unable to communicate with the ponies, thus making him another staple character in my canon.

>>795425795425 Hmm. I'll make sure to read it! I'm still trying to start up my own fic.

>>795436795436

Well, tell me when you're fic comes out and I'll read it.

>>795457795457 I'll link it once it's up! It's name is Spheres, and if you want to see the prologue, bug Pennington Inkwell and he might fork it over. Password maybe not.

>>795477795477

Guess what Neon? Chapter 1.5 is an interlude with your Favorite character!

"CUTIE MARK CRUSADER FOURTH WALL BREAKERS! YAY!"

I like it! but I did enjoy it a little more in the last story in Death's chapter where he started singing random verses for no reason. But still he's a nice little touch! I only hope he gets to troll Twilight with his impossible powers!

>>797190797190

There was a challenge in that Chapter to guess the 4 songs. Can you guess them? Here's a hint. The first song is Okkusenman, and I'm telling you this because it's a japanese song and not many people would get it. Can you guess the other 3?

Also, he wasn't singing for no reason, he was singing because he was bored.

>>798015798015 I know the last one is "You're gonna go far kid" but not the others.

>>798023798023

Okay, I'll tell you since not many others will even try to guess. the 2nd one is "I can't defeat airman" and the 3rd is "Paper wings" by rise against. But good job on getting the last one.

>>798033798033 The last one was easy since someone did a pony version of that song. Think it's called "Join the Herd" by Forest Rain.

>>798039798039

Okay, I'll have to check that out. It sounds So Awesome!

>>798045798045 It is... it is.

>>798048798048

"Twilight Sparkle , Pinkie Pie, Applejack and Fluttershy. Do not be afraid, we will never fade. Rainbow Dash and Rarity, Join the herd, and you will see!"

All I can say is:

>>798070798070 It got onto EQD too! Do you know other brony music makers?

>>798079798079

Mandopony, Acousticbrony, Woodentoaster, Thelivingtombstone, Micthemicrophone, Jackleapp, Aviators, Tsyolin, etc.

>>798100798100 Don't forget Omnipony and Princewhateverer!

>>798120798120

I know Omnipony, I just forgot. I've never heard of Princewhateverer, however.

>>798127798127 He's really good! One of his best is "One Last Apology" that he made with Cobalt... I forget the rest of the guys name. He also helped Acousticbrony, Mandopony and the rest with their Balloonparty collab. And another great musician is MetaJoker, he usually just does vocals for other artists.

>>798149798149

Cool. I've ran out of things to say, so all I can say is cool.

Heh, I almost feel sorry for Majora and Mask. K and C are CRAZY! Huh, now I know what C's letter stands for.

>>818403818403

And K stands for KooKoo.

>>818453818453 Hahaha! Good one!

... Insanity?

>>822066822066

Windsweeper will be in the dream sequence with You. Majora and Mask will be talking with K and C while Windsweeper helps you find K and C through the land of dreams and Insanity.

>>822083822083 Nice! I'll make sure to put the dream sequence in one of my future chapters! That way in the future we can do more cross overs through the chapters!

P.S I could totally see K and C messing with Majora's joy ride and Death's, Ray's and Windsweeper's lives along with Neon's even more.

>>822117822117

Yeah. the 2 stories take place in 2 different universes, But Windsweeper And The Neon in the story are linked through time and space.

>>822130822130 Ah! Makes sense. And use my characters anytime you wish! And plus The Land of Dreams and Insanity is fun to play around with.

>>822192822192

OK, it's done, make sure you tell it from your where your character is. That means Tell the parts where you wake up, you can create the scene where they introduce themselves to eachother, tell the manticore scene, and create what happens between the manticore scene and the scene were they find the guys, tell the scene where everyone meets up, and tell what happens when Neon wakes up, just as I told what happened when Mask and Windsweeper woke up.

You sure nailed my characters perfectly! And I like how you took my orange juice line. FAVE CHAPPY!

EDIT: And I'll make sure to do the scenes right.

>>822944822944

Yes, the Orange juice line was a fave of mine, but I have to Fix a mistake I made where I mixed up K and C in their second scene, so reread it soon, cause I'll have the mistake fixed.

>>822944822944

Also, I made a cover for this story. Neon is on it. The cutie mark description in your story was quite vague, so drawing it was mostly guessing on my part. The picture in front of each character is their cutie mark (Or in Mask's case, the creeper face on his shirt) and the picture behind them is the cutie mark of the character they will be mainly ascociated (but not neccesaraly shipped) with (Except in your case where it's K and C's heads.).

Also, I edited the description. CHECK IT OUT!

>>825215825215 (deep breath) YES! Magnificent ! I'm going as fast as I can running the next chapter through my head. If everything goes according to plan then it'll be out by tonight!

EDIT: I rewrote the chapter and now it has a detailed description of her cutie mark. I also played with the 'cheese and Discord's uncle argument.

Oh! Simply marvelous!

>>828624828624

Next  chapter: Pinkie throws a party for Death and Ray.

>>831337831337 That's Pinkie for you.

>>831459831459

http://raythedeku.deviantart.com/art/Illustration-for-Chapter-3-5-of-SMaT-311518044

Indeed.

>>831491831491 That's the closest thing to fan art for my story.... I'm so happy.

P.S Great drawing!

>>831510831510

http://raythedeku.deviantart.com/art/Illustration-for-chapter-4-of-SMaT-311520422

Thanks.

I'll actually draw K and C on my Deviantart methinks.

>>831547831547 Awesome! But I find it funny in my first fic I do an impromptu crossover of sorts! And unlike 'Griffin the Griffin' and 'The Ballad of Echo the Diamond Dog' we actually line ours up!

>>831563831563

Actually, GtG and tBoEtDD do line up.

>>831811831811 Not really. They do kind of but they don't match. Like in Echo's version Griffin is a mercenary and not a human turned griffin. And in Griffin's they left before the battle of Wethoof. They may line up a little but ours are perfectly lined up.

>>831826831826

Ah. I see. but GtG is so awesome.

>>831843831843 Yep! That is true!

.... Confusion levels at maximum capacity captain. You're gonna have to explain the Doctor at one point! And by explain I mean how come no one is like 'What's the shiny stick?' Also Death is best protagonist so far. (unless Majora counts)

>>836831836831

Don't worry, as far as everyone else is concerned, it's just a stick that some unicorn gave him. Also, The Doctor shall meet the Writer, a timelord of my own fabrication. The writer will be in his second incarnation, until he regenerates into the third. I didn't want to put the 1st in because I wanted to have the 3rd in later, and I wanted to have a regeneration in the story. The 2nd has orange hair, like alot of the characters, so sorry about that, but the 3rd is blond, so there won't be an over-ammount of Redheads for long.

>>836866836866 David Tenant is best Doctor. Also: You have one of everything don't you?

>>836889836889

4th Doctor is the best (That was Tom baker, right?)! What do you mean one of everything?