A EQG and Harry Potter Crossover. We follow Sunset Shimmer and the students of Canterlot High when they travel to London, England to compete in the International Scholastic Competition, Quiz UK. Yet the girls soon find there is more to London, and in fact England, than was detailed in the travel brochures.
With dark magic, and powerful wizards, the girls find themselves caught up in an adventure that even Pinkie Pie would never have guessed.
Once again, I must thank very deeply Kitsy-Chan, for her wonderful story idea, and continuing help with creating the story. I hope I do the prompt justice.
I've recently gotten a new editor, his name is Kalash, check out his work!
Chapters (21)
Very nice start!
Will there be any physical fighting in this story?
hum this looks to be a really good start to a really good story.
7425067 Physical fighting? I guess so. This is a HP Crossover.
Hey there. I have to say, this DOES have the potential to be a darn good story. The exchanges, emotional content and future chapter set-up are all well done in all the right places. I'm guessing this story is set after "Friendship Games" but before "Legend of Everfree" (though I freely admit I could be wrong on that guess). As far as the Harry Potter timeline, is this set before or after "Deathly Hallows"?
At any rate, I will definitely be looking forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow.
7425268 You are right on the EQG timeline, and the HP timeline will be revealed. It will be clear once things progress.
7425284 Okie-dokie. :-D Thanks very much.
Woohoo, looking good so far, doing this justice.
Potterhead Mlpfan mode ACTIVATED
Never read a Harry Potter fanfic or book. Only seen all the movies. Written by Sparky Brony? There's a first time for everything.
You use "Principle" instead of "Principal." The word you want to use is "Principal," which means the same as Headmaster. A "Principle" is not a person.
Also, you switch between "Principle" and "Princess" sometimes. "Princess" doesn't apply to this context.
And easy on the way you deliver information. "Show, Don't Tell" is usually a good principle to have when writing.
That's all I have to say.
7427841 I'll address the concerns. Thank you so much for the input!
Very interesting so far. I wonder how they got through the barrier. I didn't think it let muggles through.
...but then again they aren't ordinary muggles, are they? ;)
This just occurred to me but what if Holmes was actually a Auror who moonlights as a muggle detective? It would explain a few things.
7461952 Never thought of that before, that would be pretty cool.
Thumbs up for another great chapter. The plot thickens as we learn more.
I'm looking forward to more of this. I'm rather curious if this will be a short story or something much longer, and about where in the time-line these girls have arrived. Dumbledore is still around, so that limits things.
My guess? Fifth Year, and they are about to be seen along with Harry who is under charges of using magic in public against the dementors.
7503834 Exactly when in the Harry Potter universe will become clear in the next chapter or two. Though you are quite close. I do plan on this being a moderate length story. I haven't decided on the full length of it, but it's not a little story.
Hey there. Thanks very much for getting the next chapter up. I really appreciate you going to the effort. Great job on the exchanges, emotional content, action and future chapter set-up in all the right places. The culture clash concerning the two different types of magic is also well done as are the clues to the timeline in the HP verse. I'll definitely be looking forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow.
Hmmm that prophecy sounds like the mane 7 are in for a more than magical trip than just seeing london is the golden trio gonna show?
now this story is defiantly worthy keeping a eye on.
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So far, so good. By the way, are you planning on incorporating MACUSA and other things from the North American Wizarding community?
Hey there. I have to say, once again, great job on this latest chapter. The exchanges, emotional content and future chapter set-up are all well done in all the right places. I particularly liked the discussion of the similarities and differences between certain magical beings in Equestria and in the human world AND the magical gear the Mane Seven got equipped with. Somehow, though, I will have a bad feeling that Spike might end up getting jealous of Twi's new owl, much like his dragon counterpart. At any rate, I'll definitely be looking forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow.
love this chapter absolutely perfect.
I can't weight to see ware things go from here.
I don't understand why, if they are in danger, they just go back to Canterlot High, and possibly the portal. To, you know, report this to the Princesses in Equestria, that their defeated enemies are free in another reality, gaining power. I'm also confused why Fudge was included when he barely had any presence as far as talking went. Also, Dumbledore is incredibly hands-on in helping here, travelling with them to get their items from Diagon Alley, when in the original work other professors did that kind of helpful thing.
Those quibbles aside, I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes, and how all of their abilities express themselves. Especially the non-Unicorn ones.
Is there really a place in the UK named Quiz?
I'm surprised the girls went with the wizards that attacked them without warning. Why would they trust them?
Well then, can't say I'm surprised to see him here, to be honest the title's a bit of a giveaway, and he's a rather popular villain for fanfic writers who know about him.
7541043 Because Fudge is an idiot that's why, the less we see of him the better in my opinion.
Never thought I would say this but...MORE. I WANT MORE. When will the next chapter arrive?
7574307 Well, currently this story is on an every two week posting on mondays. Your luck, Monday the 19th, I've got a chapter ready to go! So I'll be posting it sometime tomorrow, hope you enjoy. It's roughly the same length as the last one.
7576223 Thank you.
I love this story and I can see it is going to get really good and keep growing.
Hey there. Thanks greatly for getting the next chapter up. I really appreciate you going to the effort. Once again, great job on the exchanges, emotional content, humor and future chapter set-up in all the right places. I particularly liked the scene with Rainbow on the broom, Fluttershy communicating with the horses and Sunset, Twilight and Rarity at wand practice. And, judging by the tri-wizard tournament references, I'm guessing that this story takes place during "Goblet of Fire" (albeit with the HP series updated so that the books take place in the 2010s rather than the 1990s), though I'll freely admit that I could be wrong . At any rate, I'll definitely be looking forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow.
the music montage is perfect but she is just that good.
Kitsy Can steep forward and take a bow.
7579241 *giggles* sorry, its Equestria Girls and we all know how important music is in that.
I wonder if they're going to meet Harry and the gang.
did someone point out that "and" is used twice in a row in the title?
7581607 Lmao, I fixed it. Thanks so much for noticing that
7542141 They were vastly outnumbered, and as such didn't have much of a choice.
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I'm surprised no one else did.
How is the next chapter coming along? I thought this was going to be updated every other Monday?
7616592 yeah...that was the plan....as it is the chapter is about half done. I got caught up on the five score PSID project. Don't worry, I'll have a new chapter out of those story....soon.
Hey there. Not much I can say other than, thanks greatly for getting the next chapter up. I really appreciate you going to the effort. Superb job on the exchanges, emotional content, action and future chapter set-up in all the right places. I particularly liked the exchange between Sunset and Dumbledore, as well as the (rather one-sided) duel between Sunset and Crabbe and the "Oh Crud" scene when the Death Eaters brought in somebody who might even be worse than their Dark Lord. I'll definitely be looking forward to the next chapter(s) ( particularly being I'm curious as to how the Humane Seven and Harry and his pals will end up beating Grogar ) as soon as time and inspiration will allow.
wow super good righting Sparky Brony truly a amazing chapter.
7632655 Does anyone else think, that with practice using a wand, rather than her horn, she could mop the floor with Mad-Eye?
That's actually a really good setup. Having a villain on top of the death eaters. Sounds like this version of Harry is going to have a story with a very different ending.
Haven't commented previously, but I love to read about how the MLP characters interact with wizards and other HP characters. That's what brought me to this fic in the first place.
I'm a bit worried for when the girls will encounter Professor Snape. Thank Celestia they don't have to deal with Umbridge.
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fuck wands, we learn that later on.
and as far as all of that goes vs mad-eye?
she would just transform back (she has seen McGonagall do it, so why not.)
great chapter over all.
The proper term is disembark.
Not much I can say other than, once again, thanks greatly for getting the next chapter up. I really appreciate you going to the effort. Once again, you did an excellent job on the exchanges, emotional content, action and future chapter set-up in all the right places. I particularly liked Dog Spike finding out he has the ability to speak dragon as well as human (makes sense given the species of his counterpart in Equestria). I feel bad for those poor thestrals as well as the dragon that got taken control of. Still, that just makes me even more eager to see Grogar get his in the end . And, well, compared to this mess, the upcoming chaos at Camp Everfree is going to seem like a proverbial walk in the park. At any rate, I'll definitely be looking forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow.
totally awesome chapter this story just rocks.