Two takes on one image. The first (The Job), what Pinkie's job interview with the Cakes may have been like. The second (The Family), just an idea about how something a little more serious would play out between them. (Two quick-fics to practice writing dialogue for the Cakes and Pinkie.)
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Well, besides the fact that the two stories collide, and a few off things here and there, not too bad.
First one in which Pinkie gets to live at SC as a job and the other as Pinkie getting adopted, but what happened to her parents? The first is standard Pinkie (with nervousness added, which I think was a wonderful addition). The second is more somber and I'd really have liked to see what happened to her parents (but that wasn't the focus of the story, even though you got me curious. Also, odd with Pinkie being quiet like that but still bubbly when she gets started in a conversation [possibly due to parent loss]). Anyway, I'm rambling...
All in all, good work. ![]()
Both stories were good, but the second one made me feel warm inside ![]()
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