For years, I have waited.
I have watched the skies, ever clouded by the windigos since the time of Platinum the Traitor.
At long last, with the coming of the one called Twilight Sparkle, I will set the world right.
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Between Lines
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7407303 I feel like this is a reference that has sailed *cleanly* over my head.
Oh wow, this was good. Powerfull.
The collision of two completely incompatible ideologies. I really hope theres a sequel, i want this poor pony to find peace.
7411281 I actually have a plan for a sort-of sequel.
By putting him in Ponyville, any future stories can have him woven into the narrative as a background character.
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Thats probably the best way to do it.
Looks like you've done it again.
I haven't felt so conflicted in a while. Part of me wants to know more, both before and after the events of this story. I just... kinda want to rub his nose in the culture shock. Pegasi, earth pony, and unicorn living in peace amongst each other. And with dragon and griffon alongside them.
I do understand his side of it, having grown up in the Forgotten Lands, but... Nngh.
7683187 Don't worry, I'm sitting on a story discussing just this topic.
Well, that was beautiful.
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It will only end in his suicide, oh wait, he can't die. I guess he'll simply go mad from the revelation. Couldn't happen to a nicer psychopath.
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I would assume that if you manage to break the slab, then he would. But now he'll be potentially subjected to his own personal hell.
Man I really want to know more about this city.