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Pinkie's Portable Pocket Dimension

Twilight Sparkle was just writing down a note on the definition of infinity.
It could have been a simple note.
Just a note.

But then Pinkie Pie showed up...

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Molly Dreemurr

Molly Dreemurr #1 · Jul 15th, 2016 · 2 · ·

You know, Pinkie having a pocket dimension can be cannon, she is so random at some times, So here have a like!

silvadel

silvadel #2 · Jul 15th, 2016 · 2 · ·

Time Travel and Twilight Sparkle do not go together well. The trouble is about to come.

silvadel

silvadel #3 · Jul 15th, 2016 · 2 · ·

And if that is your first story, then welcome aboard. You made a far better start than 99% of the authors on the site did with their first story.

Ebunix

Ebunix #4 · Jul 15th, 2016 · 1 · ·

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Thank you! It's nice to hear that it isn't as bad as I thought it would be.

RainCrasher

RainCrasher #5 · Jul 15th, 2016 · 2 · ·

Hehehehe this was a fun read! and it fits the character so well!

SecretAgentPlotTwist

SecretAgentPlotTwist #6 · Jul 16th, 2016 · 2 · ·

First Story? That's some impressive first story work right there. My first story was terrible.
Keep up the good work, this was fun

Pun System

Pun System #7 · Jul 16th, 2016 · 2 · ·

This strangely makes sense, in a Pinkie sort of way.

Eruantalon

Eruantalon #8 · Jul 16th, 2016 · 6 · ·

7393580 Yes, she can get a cannon out of her mane, too! And she does, in canon!

SeventhBrony

SeventhBrony #9 · Jul 17th, 2016 · 1 · ·

Well considering that in all likelihood that Pinkie an elderich I think that's how it's spelled being, I'd say you did good job making her a simple caporial being
As others have said nice job on your first story

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