A snapshot of the relationship between Featherweight and his father.
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"If it explores new possibilities or evokes the slightest excitement, it has no merit." —literary scholars, probably
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This is what happens when I decide to write as pretentiously as I possibly can.
...Whoa.
That.... was fucking beautiful...... 'nuff said......
My only problem with the writing was the lack of contractions and certain word usage.
Beyond those problems, this story was very beautiful; felt like some form of poetry.
And the fact that this was only 1000 words... whether intentional or not, I give praise to that.
Wow...this is really sweet. Words can't do this justice, so just have a fave.
Wow. That was amazing.
In a word, beautiful. Very very well written. Have you any more pieces like this?
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In terms of technical writing, this one is probably my best. In terms of making people think, it's probably on par with Uncle Dave's Coffee Shop.
4674580 In that case that story is going on zee read list
This is really nice, and especially so for being the minimum possible length. The lyrical opening got me, and the story was thoughtful and moving all the way through to that clever proverb use at the end. I've only seen these two as father and son in one other story, I think (punzil504's Milkshakes) but, having read this, I think that's a shame. This may be four years old, but I'm still faving it.