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Twilight Sparkle is fed up of her unrequited love for Rainbow Dash. She has decided that the time has come to reveal the passion she has kept hidden for so long - but how? There is only one sane, logical way to do this.

She must become a cloud.

Nothing can go wrong.

First Published
1st Aug 2012
Last Modified
1st Aug 2012
#1 · 124w, 19h ago · · ·

YES. Ridin' on cloud...Twi:twilightsheepish:

And then I read the first lines, and I liked where it was going:rainbowwild:

(Does...does this count as vore?)

#2 · 124w, 18h ago · · ·

Of course!  You couldn't think of a better idea, Twilight.

#3 · 124w, 18h ago · 3 · ·

Twicloud Forever!

Now, on to the story.

One thing to say to that.

Now, Twilight can truly say she's... into Rainbow Dash. :rainbowlaugh:

#4 · 124w, 18h ago · · ·

I still say HLT will finish this for you Blue

#5 · 124w, 18h ago · · ·

Oh lord.

I don't need to say anything else. :twilightoops:

#6 · 124w, 18h ago · · ·

Them words is shit, eh.

#7 · 124w, 18h ago · · ·




#8 · 124w, 18h ago · · ·

seems legit

#9 · 124w, 18h ago · · ·


Don't you know?

He told you.

He told you Dash was a connoisseur.

#10 · 124w, 18h ago · · ·

I should have guessed the author just by looking at the description. Who else could come with such a a idea, and write about Twilight being an inanimate object in love? :derpytongue2:

#11 · 124w, 18h ago · · ·

Now I'm quite interested in seeing Twilight's life through the water cycle xD

I love TwiDash, and despite the loose, comedic nature of this, it was no exception. Great job!

#12 · 124w, 18h ago · · ·


That was so cute

#13 · 124w, 18h ago · · ·


I...I don't even...

Why is this a great story? How is that a thing? Why do I love it so much?

#14 · 124w, 18h ago · 1 · ·

I completely lost it at the book title. The rest of the story did not disappoint.

Nice job! :yay:

#15 · 124w, 18h ago · · ·

This story is... it's just... :rainbowlaugh:

#16 · 124w, 18h ago · · ·

Twicloud x Rainbow Dash's parched throat are the OTPFTW forever.

#17 · 124w, 18h ago · · ·

Oh, Blueshift.  You so funny.  :rainbowkiss:  

I think TwiCloud should have hooked up with Raincloud.  He's better for her, anyway.

I look forward to more "very soon".

#18 · 124w, 18h ago · 1 · ·

Not sure if comedy or 'I Have No Mouth And I Must Scream'...

#19 · 124w, 18h ago · · ·

this was glorious :rainbowlaugh:

#20 · 124w, 18h ago · · ·

What is it with you and turning Twilight into things?

Oh well. -marks to read later-

#21 · 124w, 18h ago · · ·


To be fair I have done far far more stories where Twilight doesn't turn into anything! :twilightblush:

#23 · 124w, 18h ago · 1 · ·

Eeyup, did not see this ending well, and I was right :rainbowhuh:

Poor Rainbow's in for one hell of a surprise

#24 · 124w, 18h ago · · ·

Oh goddamit it Blue.

#25 · 124w, 18h ago · · ·

Funny as always, Blueshift. I noticed a few errors while reading; I hope you don’t mind me pointing them out (I know, I know, just like me to be in “editor mode” while reading one of your tales of madness).

> “Daring Do And The You Might Be In Love With Your Best Friend”

Maybe this isn’t so under Brit English, but I’m used to seeing book titles italicized.

> “I’m just the Princess’s star pupil! I only-“

Should be a dash. I think this happened on one other occasion too.

> it wasn’t like her previous experiences with flying, she was no longer trying to force herself up into the air.

There were a few comma splices like this.

> Rainbow Dash continued to tread on the cloud until it got smaller and smaller, it’s fluffy body compacting into rain until finally the last of the cloud-stuff vanished with a pop.

Its/it’s confusion.

As always, good to see you working your very special brand of “what the fuck am I reading” onto the lives of ponies.

#26 · 124w, 17h ago · · ·

“Oh no!” Daring Do cried. “I am trapped by this evil magician and literally the only way to free me is if a sexy rainbow maned pegasus makes out with a cute yet surprisingly intelligent librarian! If that doesn’t happen I will die! Forever!”

Best start to a Twidash fic EVER!:twilightsmile::rainbowwild:

#27 · 124w, 17h ago · · ·

Holy crap, Blueshift writing TwiDash. I was also looking for some hot "pony on cloud" action, but I guess this had enough.

#28 · 124w, 17h ago · · ·


Thanks Vimbert

Pretty much every single book I own over here in ol' Blighty has the titles completely capitalised. Didn't consider it might not be a universal thing!

#29 · 124w, 17h ago · · ·


Well, I'm pretty clueless on what goes on over there, sooo...

I know over here, we have titles of articles or short stories in quotation marks.

I dunno. It's like when we declared independence, suddenly we had to have our OWN GRAMMAR BECAUSE AMERICAAAAAAAAAA

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#31 · 124w, 17h ago · 1 · ·

Blueshift, you glorious bastard!

I dont even like twidash but goddamn that was perfect!

#33 · 124w, 17h ago · · ·

Well, that something right there.

I am going go step over here

#34 · 124w, 17h ago · · ·

Oh Blueshift, you went and did done dood it again ! :pinkiecrazy:

#35 · 124w, 17h ago · · ·

Why do I get the feeling you don't like Twi much with how often you do bad things to her in your stories? :rainbowwild:

#36 · 124w, 17h ago · 1 · ·

Move aside, Romeo and Juliet, we have a new tragic love story. :rainbowlaugh:

"Nothing can go wrong."

The universal sign that everything will, in fact, go wrong.

“I don’t know Twilight…” Spike sucked his bottom lip in, eyes rigid with fear. “This sounds like a really bad idea, but I can’t put my finger on why.”

I can put several fingers on why.

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#38 · 124w, 17h ago · · ·

I absolutely love this story its funny not to serious and does not go on to long I would love read more like it.:heart:

#39 · 124w, 17h ago · · ·

Nympho Cumulous...I will never look at a purple cloud the same way again

Also good ending lol

#40 · 124w, 17h ago · · ·

Oh Blueshift, you always know how to tickle my brain in just the right way.




:facehoof:That came out wrong.

#41 · 124w, 17h ago · · ·


Oh no, actually I think she is best pony.

(Or at least best pony equal with Scootaloo!)

#42 · 124w, 17h ago · · ·


#43 · 124w, 17h ago · · ·

Yet again my mind is filled with "wut" as I finish the latest piece of Twilight being something inanimate.

#44 · 124w, 17h ago · · ·

Ha! Twilight ponypiss:rainbowlaugh:

#45 · 124w, 16h ago · 1 · ·

What are the odds Twilight develops a new fetish once she's reconstituted?

#46 · 124w, 16h ago · · ·

Okay so not read this yet but seriously? Twilight ships seem so trendy at the moment, especially bizarre ones like this. And Changeling stories. Well I've read the one where she turned herself into a cake to be with Celestia so I might as well read this.

I'm just waiting now for a story where she turns herself into like, a toaster or something that so she can be with Chrysalis...

#47 · 124w, 16h ago · 1 · ·


I invented the weird Twilight ship! :twilightsheepish:

#48 · 124w, 16h ago · · 1 ·

I read the first 45 words and i did worlds hardest facepalm :facehoof:

#49 · 124w, 16h ago · · ·

I know you! You're the guy who wrote "The Star in Yellow!" :pinkiegasp:





..................Uh. And then you made this. This is kind of messed up. I can't say I don't like it, but for the life of me I can't think why. :pinkiecrazy:

#50 · 124w, 16h ago · · ·


Variety is the spice of life my friend!

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