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Bon Bon has crafted a perfect little life for herself in Ponyville. A perfect little house, a perfect little job, a perfect little marefriend. It becomes less perfect when ponies she has never met start to greet her on the street. It seems that somepony else wants a piece of Bon Bon's perfect life, and Bon Bon may be powerless to stop them.
Even if she could... would she?
Thanks. Always thought things like that help make a character more than a plot device.
On monsters or not, I wasn't sure myself for a while. Originally, none of them had names and they were all kicked out about five or seven pages in. When it got longer and they got a little more reason than 'we're bad guys,' I got a bit more unsure. Waffled on the ending for a little while. But this was supposed to stick to the friendlier side of the show, so I went with this. I'm sorry if it seems at all sloppy, I really didn't want to waffle on that ending until I lost interest. If it makes it any better, consider that only 1 to 3 of them actually did anything wrong. Whether these three should be forgiven or not is in the eye of the forgiver, though.
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