Old crush? Big Mac tag? Damn, I wish I was a fan of this pairing.

Cute, and a great read.  Seemed a bit on the short side, some more development would've been nice.  Really an interesting concept, though.  I'd like to see this drawn out into a multi-chapter fic rather just a one shot.

Good job.

That was quite a sweet story. A bit lacking in description, but that's okay as this is a short story. The pace did seem to pick up a bit near the end, which is a negative.

Still. This deserves a fave and a group.

Keep writing.

MacDash is my guilty pleasure, and I was excited to see this since I like your ongoing story.

I wish this wasn't humanized. It isn't that I'm generally against humanized (ok, full disclosure, I kinda am, but hear me out), but it really threw me. Starting out with her trying, and failing, to get in the Wonderbolts had me solidly believing it was a normal fic. How would humanized RD fly? Does she have wings? Are the Bolts just a track team? I was convinced from the first part of the story that she was a pegasus. It was hugely jarring for me when they started talking about arms and clothes and Big Mac's flannel shirt. It jarred me to the point I almost didn't finish.

The pacing was quick, but it's a one-shot so that isn't a big deal. There wasn't much in the way of grammatical errors. It's a solid story.

Keep writing, mon ami.

nice job

hells to the yeah.

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Heh, in some of my Humanized stories, they are mentioned as a Rock Band instead of a Runner/Flyer group. Could be another possibility for them as Human counterparts or something like that.

Short story shipping romances don't always work well with me, but I enjoyed this. Bookmarked into my favorites bar.

great fic... the only problem I have is a personal one where I actually get furious about people sleeping around... I know it's a part of life... but I still can't help if it pisses me off to the point where I feel the need to use a high-power rifle...

Great story. It would have been cool to have a big scene where she left the gang and he fought her out of it when they turned on her, but it is great as is.

This is a story of compassion and conviction, a story where two lost soul- We get it it's good alright sorry about my long winded comments. It's a great story and deserves the love of a 1000 shippers.