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In the far north, where changelings live, change begins -- a single changeling breaks out of the collective mind, becoming an individual. The story follows the life and adventures of Chip -- a changeling that will bring upon a new era in the Hive.
Awesome image made by my dad, yay!
Edited by Deadray Jenkins!
Well, the current project, which I'd like to invite you to, is entitled The End of All Worlds and is turning into an enormous, multi-author project that will span hundreds of worlds, have deep conflict, interesting puzzles, and a prize beyond anything you could ever hope for: your world surviving when all others are annihilated.
And Crab People, because someone made one, and he's awesome.
Check it, out, at the least it's going to be a massive collection of various OCs and worlds, and is spawning a wide variety of worlds and cool characters with detailed backgrounds. there's even been an increase in the number of Equestrian slots available.
Rest assured it's on its way 
Also, I plan on re-writing the whole thing to be more readable (big warm thanks to the editor who aids me in this! 
), so stay tuned to a more reader friendly version soon!
On that note I would also like to hug and thank all my current readers for putting up with the current form. I wans't aware that this style of punctuation and linebreaks I use isn't too good 
Thank y'all for reading and cheering me on! I promise I'll do my best not to dissapoint! 
Dude, I don't understand why you don't have more likes. This is actually a quality story. Your idea is flowing beautifully, there's actually something of character development going on here, though I expect more to actually come about later (after all, I don't think there's much room for character development in the changling hive. The fact that you've got some character development going on is amazing.), and you can see the challenges the main character is undergoing (though it is a bit stinted by the lack of further character development, but again, the fact that you're getting any in a setting such as the changling hive is amazing).
Thanks for the kind words!
The character development as we see it now is a bit stale because the last few chapters are still a flashback, explaining what Chip really underwent during Chrysalis's training. I believe his persona will flourish even more once he snaps out of it and meets the world, with all its flaws and beauty, head on 
Thanks! I really try hard to make it the best I can.
But while words come easy, I'm afraid I have two left hands (that might as well be just hooves) when it comes to drawing. I barelly managed to put together the cover to my other story, A Royal Wedding. In nearly 1,5 hours. And I agree that visual aids are awesome.
Sorry to say, today and tommorow ain't gonna be any update. I have some stuff going on concerning my job that keeps me from being rested enough and in the mood to write 
Sorry everypony, as soon as things sort themselves out, I'll work extra hard to put up the missing chapters. Hope you'll forgive this small slip 
well...
no, no it isn't, because then the story would be over, and then I wouldn't get to read more of your awesome work.
BTW:
You should check out a project of mine. I think this for two reasons:
One, you're a great author, and I think you'd do well adopting one of the teams from the project.
Two, I think you'd create some really interesting characters.
Find it [url=www.fimfiction.net/blog/32343]here[/url] if you're interested.
Thank you.
Sincerely, that was awesome.
I liked the "Now Kiss" moment.
I literally LOL'd at this chapters.
Say, would you maybe be willing to to toss a shout-out for me?
I'm working on a project called The End of All Worlds, and it needs more characters (about 49 of them) and more people to adopt some of the teams. (about 18 teams still unclaimed)
I really think you'd do great as an adopter of a team, you're a great writer!
i don't mean clop fic 
i was meaning if you inply that she forced him to do something don't go into detail,
but the notion that they had sex with her would be interesting and would make there already strange relationship more interesting
and its not clop fic we have hands its a wank fic
Dunno about you, I have hooves 
And I think the Queen didn't think much of changelings if she actually kept a colt to herself
To be honest, if they were all her children, the implications would be Oedypian
EDIT: Come to think of it... I smells another intermission 
far enough but remember that she isn't his biological mother and she shows more affection for him than any other if this scene took place it would be after her bad night with the stallion.
one again don't go into detail but it would be a major twist and i think people would like it
like on the last paragraph the queen asks him to step into her chamber then it ends on a cliff hanger. the next chapter could talk about him freaking out 
I never said she wasn't his biological mother -- mah changelings may work a bit differently, that is the reason I put the Alternative Universe tag to this story
Also, I don't quite understand why would that be a twist. In our human world, mating is kinda taboo and means some kind of commitment. Changelings? It's meh for them.
A few notes here:
1. I never had a hangover, never touched alcohol myself. So yeah, the whole description is... Well, he's a changeling. That is how changelings react to hard cider. Sue me
2. I was REALLY thirsty while writing this.
*enjoys a REAL mug of water* Ahhhh...
R.I.P. poor, abused female sparkling.
Because, no matter how much we try to deny it, we know that in a story like this she won't get a happily ever after.
~ More like a 'sacrifice self from last minute switch to goodguys despite having just become a lovable character in order to save ___'
:'(
I just watched Iron Giant and cried like a baby at the ending. It was a suprising experience.
On that note, who knows -- maybe she won't return to good? Maybe Chrysalis will kill her faster? Maybe she will be a b... bad character that no one will love, And wish she had died.
Or maybe she will redeem Chip back to his Mom's side?
Well now, I hope this transformation isn't totally permanent... that'd suck for the story. Up until he takes a bubble bath and reveals he's a changeling, goes "Huh. Weird." and then goes back to bathing, like nothing's wrong, while all the ponies nearby start freaking out.
I'm assuming a large scale bath, like in the episode that featured the Poison Joke.
Thanks!
Hurr durr, maybe
To be honest I've no clue what is going to happen. Given Chip doesn't know he's under the effect of Poison Joke, and he doesn't bath at all, the effect can last quite a while
Oy, do I get them bits if it turns out this will be Zecora's evil twin sister, who really is a curse-monger?
I sure hope so!
Thanks for the kind words 
If all else fails,I'll just pull an interesting deus ex machina to prod it to life. Buuuut I think that won't be neccesary.
Nah, keep your bits. I'm so happy right now!
While looking around for some wallpaper for the kitchen I came across My Little Pony wallpaper stickers.
Was totally worth all the awkward glares from the other people in line. Now, Fluttershy and Twilight look at me from above my monitor!
Something like this
Or this
Thanks! Oh yeah, it will be funny. Most things are funny if you like to torture your characters. I'm a long time Pen&Paper Game Master and I was taught by the best of the best. Loosing all starting items and getting me and my friends thrown in jail in ten seconds flat was his specialty
MUAHAHAHAHA!
this is perfect! I hold the world in my hooves!
AND THEN THEY ALL KISSED!!!
*SLAP*
Ahem, sorry about that, my Ego got a hold of me for a sec.
I am glad to have contributed positively to the story, and I'm still squee'ing over the fact that I prompted an entire side-chapter.
And you've pulled this story through much better than I would've.
I wonder how the guards are going to react to his "Suddenly: Changeling!" trick?
Any way it turns out, I'll keep reading eagerly, you're a great writer!
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I dun get it.
I'M-SO-IMPATIENT
The whole motion of sex in MLP to me is... 
here are my shades, use them * puts on shades* to make cool refrences 
cant wait for the next chapter 
I get not your reference, sorry
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