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"If you only write when you're inspired you'll be a fairly decent poet, but you'll never be a novelist."

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Scootaloo begins her new life as a night school teacher. She helps those seeking to finish their education. But, they aren't the only ones she seeks to help as she begins her night strolls through the city.

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Great story! I loved the emotion you put into those words, but perhaps you could elaborate on the story more.

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Thanks for the compliment. What do you mean by elaborating?

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I mean that there could be more added to it.

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I get that part. I just meant what specifically did you mean by it. I wrote the story due to having the idea and might go back to it later on, but for now it'll stay a short story. If you meant writing it to be long then I might go back and do so in my spare time. For now, I feel like this is a pretty good place to end it.

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Oh, I was just meaning by extending it longer. I like all the emotion, but it doesn't really feel like a story by ending it there.

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Ah, I get it. I guess I did leave it somewhat lacking and vague. I'll probably re-write it sooner rather than later since you liked it. Thanks again for reading.

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