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Golden Flare


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Your name is Eternal Void, and you are a student at Crystal Prep Academy. You had good grades, a clean record, oh, and you are one of the Keyblade's chosen. A lot of the students at CPA are Keyblade wielders, very few are Keyblade Masters, and one of those Masters is the principal of the school: Master Abacus Cinch.

You are just a simple wielder, and could care less if you became a Master, all you wanted to do was what your previous mentor taught you; work hard, learn, and use your Keyblade abilities to better the world. And it was because of his words, Master Flintheart's words, that you distanced yourself from other people. You cared for friendship once, but now, it clashes with what you were taught.

But maybe, six girls from a rival school could convince you otherwise. Will you open your heart to companionship once more and overcome your insecurities, or will you push it away again and be swallowed by the darkness slowly growing in your heart?


Author's Notes:
Takes place sometime after Rainbow Rocks and before Friendship Games.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 63 )

Great start of a new story! Hope to see more soon. :eeyup:

Well very good so far I would like to see where this is going

It went great, I don't see anything wrong in my eyes. Keep it up!

Is there gonna be any Disney worlds in this? I'm just really hoping is all

So Master Luna has the Oblivion Keyblade... Guess which keyblade that Master Celestia has? :trollestia:

7400574 Maybe not, it's just Equestria Girls with a Kingdom Hearts twist

7400757 awww im disappointed I'll probably still read it but with Disney characters make it more the better

7400714 Oathkeeper? (might have spelled it wrong)
The keyblade Mickey uses? (don't remember its name)
Or....kingdom key?

Lovely, just, LOVELY! 10 out of 10.

/cool cool *applauds* though I must say, things are moving kind of fast, but then again thats just me.

I can't blame Rainbow for doing this. I mean Eternal Void's keyblade has The eye of darkness on it.
But still, she shouldn't judge him through his keyblade and that he goes to Crystal Prep. :rainbowhuh:

Anyways! Great chapter Golden Flare! your kingdom hearts crossover are awesome!!! :eeyup:

7405162 Yeah, even I can admit that, but hopefully the story is still enjoyable

7405229 Thanks :twilightsmile:

Golden Flare
Question, Can they use magic?

7408385 Yes, all of them can use magic, as long as they have a Keyblade

7408412
Let me rephrase that, do Rainbow and Indigo know any moves and can you show an example?

7408419 Yes, I'm showing some of them in the next chapter, but here's a sneak peak of their skills; both Indigo and Rainbow have Thunder spells and skills remotely close to Thunder, like Thunder Raid

7400852

Mickey's keyblade is either called 'Kingdom Key D' or 'Light Seeker'. And you spell it right for Oathkeeper.

7400852 Truth be told, spoiler or not, it's Oathkeeper

7405431 Maybe if you were to slow it down from here on it wouldn't make the story stale, food for thought.

7405229

Are you saying that Riku is one too. (Scowl)

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Because Riku's keyblade, Way to the Dawn, has a demonic eye too. I think I made my earlier comment mean- sorry about that. :twilightblush:

7432220 That's ok my friend. No harm is done. :raritywink:
And I knew about the demonic eye on Riku's keyblade as well.
Rest assured Riku's one of my favorites and I don't hate the darkness at all. I'd like to keep Light and Darkness balanced in my life. Because you know you can't have one without the other.

Now the reason why I said that I don't blame Rainbow Dash for doing this and about Eternal Void's keyblade is that Rainbow fears the Darkness (I think) and when she saw that dark keyblade (If you know who it belongs to in the games) I guess she just snapped at him and wanted to protect her friends from him.

I hope this all clears up now and let us enjoy Golden Flare's awesome story. :eeyup:

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A-eyupe.:eeyup:
Say, what do you think would be the thirteen seekers of darkness in Kingdom Hears 3? :duck:

7437683 It took me a while but here is my list.

1. Xehanort
2. Xigbar
3. Isa
4. Younger Riku or Riku's Clone
5. Xemnas
6. Terra?
7. Xaldin (He was pretty strong and a tough boss in KHII It's possible that he might return)
8. Vanitas
9. Younger Xehanort (Not sure about this one with the time travel theory and all....)
10. The one guy with the dark red eyes.
11. Xehanort's heartless
12. Lightning? (Would really be surprised if that happens)
13. Sora

7477825 To me for 'Seekers of Darkness' is this!

1.Master Xehanort

2. Ansem (Xehanort's Heartless)

3. Xemnas (Xehanort's Nobody)

4. Braig (Xigbar)

5. Terranort (Xehanort possess Terra)

6. Young Xehanort

7. Isa (Saix)

8. Vanitas

9. Luxord

10. Marluxia

11, 12, 13. ??? (Can't figure out yet.)

Eternal only used basic action move. Fire, Slide Dash, Blitz and Strike Raid. Wonder what's next?!

"Show me your strength. Prove to me you're worthy of the Mark."
"Twilight!?" you say in shock.
"Get up." she swings down, only for her blade to meet solid ground as you roll out of the way.
You call forth your Keyblade and ready your battle stance, "I don't wanna hurt you, Twilight."

I like it, it's kinda surprise me that Twilight would do such a thing!

Im indiferent. However....I am curious about what keyblade Sour Sweet would have..... I guees I'll vote her.
BUT i want to end up seeing Indigo's not too long after....if thats possible.

I vote for Indigo! :pinkiehappy:

If you, Eternal Void was still wounded from the fight with Rainbow Dash, when everyone started to confront you then I have this to say to them:
Twilight, Shining, Ginger, and Taffy... What the heck is wrong with you all?! You all want to become a Keyblade master? Yet you're attacking someone who was badly injured. Sure Sour healed us up but we were not fully recovered. So in my eyes, you all are not ready by a long shot to become masters and you're cowards.

If you were fully healed then I hope you got a hidden power, ready to be unleashed on your opponents.... :eeyup:

All-in-all loved the chapter Golden! Great job! :twilightsmile:

Stand and fight! No more running away! That's what goes do!

Sour sweet not enough Sour Sweet stories

Damn. Tough call. There's not much stories of both Sour Sweet or Indigo Zap. Personally, I would go for Sour Sweet staying with him, but I'm fine with either choice.

Sour Sweet, but Indigo would be just as awesome.

Interesting start! I like!

Loved the interaction with Luna and Eternal Void. As for Twilight, she seems jealous. I wonder why...?

Whoa! What was up with Rainbow? Does she know something???

Hoo boy! Talk about a VERY tough decision! Either works with me to be honest. Although I'm leaning towards Indigo.

Indigo zap would have to be my choice.:pinkiehappy:

Yay! Great chapter! Loved it. And we understand. Life is more important most of the time.

Now, this is a surprise! I didn't expect that they would have a love that fast, I was expecting it to slowly happen until a point but this works too. Great work!

Good to see that Twilight, Shining, Ginger, and Taffy apologized. Even when they were forced by their parents...
Why do I get the feeling that Principal Cinch isn't going to be so forgiving like Eternal Void? Or maybe that's just me. :pinkiehappy:

Also, I thought at first that you rushed the feelings that Indigo felt for Eternal and vice versa. But you actually managed it to work. Nice work Golden Flare! :ajsmug:

Is it wrong that I thought that it was gonna be a harem since there's a huge cast of characters?

Can't wait for the rest of the story!

Question: What other academy is near CHS or CPA?

Reason as to why I'm asking cause I think I want to write a squeal to this story.

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