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chillbook1


One day, you will all come to my funeral just to make sure that I stay dead, but today is not that day | https://ko-fi.com/chillybook

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As a favor to Luna, Twilight and Starlight agree to look after a baby Celestia.

They should've declined.

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Brilliant! :rainbowlaugh:

7369525 Thanks, mate. I appreciate your reading.

This is hilarious. I kind of wish it was longer, but I also don't. I don't want it over yet, but I also don't think extending it would make it any better.

“I really need to start using that absorption shield instead of the deflector,” Starlight said to nopony. “Okay. This is fine. I can handle this.”

The babies began crying, shrieking sobs that felt like razors through Starlight’s ears.

“Okay… I can still handle this,” she said confidently.

Then the lasers started.

Glim-Glam wasn’t sure if she could handle it anymore.

Byoutiful.

Cute stuff like this is what you do best, chillbook. I hope to see some more great stuff from you in the future =)

7369733 Will do. Thanks for reading, and even more for commenting.

I'm feeling that awkward mixture of "why was I reading this" and "why is it over" that indicates a weird-good story. Good job; those are hard to come by.

Poor Starlight :fluttercry:

7371125 I live to please and please to live.

That doesn't actually make any sense, now that I think on it.

Thanks for reading.

Okay, Teenage Celestia made me laugh and at the same time dread my daughter's teenage years, good fanfic.

This has got to be your best story to date....or at least in the top five. If you keep pumping out stories like this I'm gonna have to make a Best of chillbook1 shelf. Or not, I'm kinda lazy like that.

7369525 This guy right here knows what's up.

7369687 This is basically what I'm feeling as well more or less.

7371952 who cares if it makes sense?

7372068 And unlike Twilly and Glim-Glam(I'm so totally in love with that nickname) your daughters teenage years won't be over in a few hours.

-BFBL

7373235 Thanks for the read, amigo. I'll try to continue to drop more fics like this. Considering the way my multichaps are going (ending) I'll have a lot more time to waste on cute, goofy sh*t like this.

Are you going to continue the story. I would like to see what kinds of trouble an infant alicorn twilight could get into after all twilight is a powerful alicorn about Celestia level as well.

I think it could go longer. Have starlight forcely end day court and drop twilight of saying payback fair. And then teleports out and drops Celestia at crystal empire. And same things happen and end with four infants and have starlight run away and show discord laughing.

7377960 Just because something can go on longer doesn't mean it should. I like the way the story ends, and I don't think I can top the jokes already made. As such, no sequels or additional chapters are planned as of now.

Clever title. Poor Starlight.

7377966 get sunset shimmer involved so she can laugh at Celestia and twilight. Maybe even repair their friendship

Twilight and books. Twilight could throw the book at starlight. I can see a lot of puns from that. An infant alicorn twilight would be so much chaos you can get discord in and bam can of worms is open. If you don't can I?

7380493 I'd really rather if you didn't

Silly Starlight. Just teleport baby Twilight up to Canterlot, and drop her off with her parents :facehoof:
Great story. Thanks for writing it :pinkiehappy:

i would like make a sequel of this in my fanfiction page,i coud use it?

9325388
Please do not do that

why not?

i were gonn to writte it in spanish, you dont want your stories being enyoied in all the world

9337263
I don't like my name associated with anything I didn't do myself. Plus, I can barely understand what it is you're even asking me. At first, you asked to do a sequel. Now you sound like you want to do a translation. I'd rather just not deal with it, and leave this story as it is.

i think i undertand now

you dont wanna to i writte a translation OR a sequel because you dont writte it?

why you didnt say that in first place?

i love this storie and i would like a sequel being protagonisted( i not sure if it writted like that) for a tired starlight, sunbusrt and sunset shimmer.

9348006
I'm sorry, but my answer is still no.

Why is Celestia in overalls?

9352149
Just wondering, did you actually come up with the story or not? (Because if the story came from someone else, then who was it?)

whoa man, trippy but I did enjoy this

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